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Nowadays people enjoy eating food imported from other countries rather than local food.

In numerous countries, individuals are accustomed to consume a more extensive types of food that cannot be filled in their nearby places. Accordingly, a large part of the food individuals eat today needs to come from different regions. In my opinion, people should rely on sure food which is producted in their countries rather than imported food. This essay will discuss about the advantages and the disadvantages of this issue. There are different favorable advantages when people eat extraordinary food. According to this accessibility of such diverse types of food implies individuals can appreciate a superior personal satisfaction. This is on the grounds that they can get an opportunity to eat exceptionally nutritious dishes that are not served in their country. Likewise, individuals can save a huge amount of voyaging cost as the food can be found in a neighborhood resturants. For instance, In China individuals can eat pizza without leaving for Italy. Furthermore, importing food can enhance the advancement business between countries. This can increase the economy, which, thus, improves the prosperity of inhabitants as the public authority has more financial plan to help the inhabitants. . On the other hand, I would explain that more genuine disadvantages are indicated in most researches. Most importantly, the imported food is probably going to present dangers to human's wellbeing. It is fact that, additives and harmful synthetic compounds are added, which makes the food less sound. In addition, this problem leads to some dangerous illnesses such as obesity which is the most common issue in the USA. Moreover, because of the steady transportation of food, the climate is continually harmed. Specifically, the air has become more dirtied due to the fossil fuel byproducts from methods for transportation. In conclusion, despite the fact that there are sure advantages when individuals approach a more extensive cluster of unfamiliar food, I accept that the inconveniences far exceed the preferences.
In numerous
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food
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today
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come
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different
regions. In my opinion,
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people
should rely on sure
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food
which is
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producted
in their
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countries
rather
than imported
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food
. This essay will
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discuss about the
advantages and the disadvantages of this issue.

There are
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different
favorable advantages when
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people
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eat
extraordinary
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food
. According to this accessibility of such diverse types of
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food
implies
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individuals
can appreciate a superior personal satisfaction. This is on the grounds that they can
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get
an opportunity to
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eat
exceptionally
nutritious dishes that are not served in their
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country
.
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,
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individuals
can save a huge amount of voyaging cost as the
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can
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in a neighborhood
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resturants
.
For instance
, In China
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individuals
can
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pizza without leaving for Italy.
Furthermore
, importing
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food
can enhance the advancement business between
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countries
. This can increase the economy, which,
thus
,
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improves
the prosperity of inhabitants as the public authority has more financial plan to
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help
the inhabitants.
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, I would
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that more genuine disadvantages
are indicated
in most researches. Most
importantly
, the imported
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food
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probably
going to present
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dangers
to human's wellbeing. It is fact that, additives and harmful synthetic compounds are
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added
, which
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makes
the
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less sound.
In addition
, this problem leads to
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some
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dangerous
illnesses such as obesity which is the most common issue in the USA.
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,
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because
of the steady transportation of
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food
, the climate is
continually
harmed.
Specifically
, the air has become more dirtied due to the fossil fuel byproducts from methods for transportation.

In conclusion
, despite the fact that there are sure advantages when
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individuals
approach a more extensive cluster of unfamiliar
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food
, I accept that the inconveniences far exceed the preferences.
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IELTS essay Nowadays people enjoy eating food imported from other countries rather than local food.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
315 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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