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Nowadays people buy can buy and sell things or services by means of several methods and modern technologies, not just via traditional ways. In my opinion, that is an excellent novelty for the society.

Nowadays people buy can buy and sell things or services by means of several methods and modern technologies, not just via traditional ways. In my opinion, that is an excellent novelty for the society. XGgjg
Nowadays people buy can buy and sell things or services by means of several methods and modern technologies, not just via traditional ways. In my opinion, that is an excellent novelty for the society. The new ways of commerce can economize people’s time and they are able to boost variety of chasing products and convenient services. These days the internet is reaching to the countrysides rapidly as well as cities and towns. Also modern technological devices such as smartphones and laptops are becoming popular amongst population. It leads to more developing and spreading of online shops. Shopping on the internet is can be convenient for all layers of people, consumers can save their time. Instead of traveling to markets and shopping malls, they may order their necessary things and couriers bring the orders to own homes or offices. On the other hand, young people have different taste compared to senior citirens. Finding themselves size or liked fashions maybe difficult for some kind of people. Due to using the internet, they can search things over the would find anything which they want. In short, people live a very busy life nowadays. According to my view, they appreciate the modern methods of trade. In other words, I think every single second is greatly valuable for people these days. Therefore, they don’t want wasting time to travel several shops through traffic jams and they would like large variety of choosing.
Nowadays
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and sell things or services by means of several methods and modern technologies, not
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via traditional ways. In my opinion,
that is
an excellent novelty for the society.

The new ways of commerce can economize
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time and
they are able to boost variety of chasing products and convenient services. These days the internet is reaching to the countrysides
rapidly
as well
as cities and towns.
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Also
modern technological devices such as smartphones and laptops are becoming popular amongst population. It leads to more developing and spreading of online shops. Shopping on the internet is can be convenient for all layers of
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people
, consumers can save their time.
Instead
of traveling to markets and shopping malls, they may order their necessary things and couriers bring the orders to
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own
homes or offices.

On the other hand
, young
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people
have
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different
taste compared to senior
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citirens
.

Finding themselves size or liked fashions maybe difficult for
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some
kind of
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people
.

Due to using the internet, they can search things over
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the
would find anything which they want.

In short,
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people
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live
a
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very
busy life nowadays. According to my view, they appreciate the modern methods of trade.
In other words
, I
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think
every single second is
greatly
valuable for
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people
these days.
Therefore
, they don’t want wasting time to travel several shops through traffic
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jams and
they would like large variety of choosing.
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IELTS essay Nowadays people buy can buy and sell things or services by means of several methods and modern technologies, not just via traditional ways. In my opinion, that is an excellent novelty for the society.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
237 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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