The new trend of people considering their work-life over their families has created a significant concern as unbalanced work and family life has become a prominent reason for a family disruption. This essay intends to discuss some pros and cons of time allocations for family and work.
The reason for increased hours of working varies from people to people. Firstly, people who are employed in labour jobs, work for more than one job or work overtime to pay their bills as the basic wage with a designated amount of time will not help them cure their expenses. For instance, people earning $14/hour working 40 hours a week will hardly be able to pay for their bills and their children’s education. Secondly, people with great salary jobs are prone to earn more and more money to feed their hunger for buying expensive things such as cars, houses, and jewellery. Finally, some people prefer to stay at work for prolonged hours to avoid family issues and maintain their peace of mind.
In contrast, the hunger for money has become a prominent cause of family disruption as more and more families are getting dismantled because of not getting enough time for healing their relations. For instance, a salesperson usually stays out of home for a prolonged period that even the money cannot soar the relations between the person and family. Although the monetary crisis can be avoided by working more hours, if the family would not be there to spend with, it is fruitless.
To conclude, increased working hours have their advantages and disadvantages, however, the balance between work and family can be more beneficial in the long run.
The new trend of
people
considering their work-life over their
families
has created a significant concern as unbalanced
work
and
family
life has become a prominent reason for a
family
disruption. This essay intends to discuss
some
pros and cons of time allocations for
family
and work.
The reason for increased
hours
of
working
varies from
people
to
people
.
Firstly
,
people
who
are employed
in
labour
jobs,
work
for more than one job or
work
overtime to pay their bills as the basic wage with a designated amount of time will not
help
them cure their expenses.
For instance
,
people
earning $14/hour
working
40
hours
a week will hardly be able to pay for their bills and their children’s education.
Secondly
,
people
with great salary jobs are prone to earn more and more money to feed their hunger for buying expensive things such as cars,
houses
, and
jewellery
.
Finally
,
some
people
prefer to stay at
work
for prolonged
hours
to avoid
family
issues and maintain their peace of mind.
In contrast
, the hunger for money has become a prominent cause of
family
disruption as more and more
families
are getting dismantled
because
of not getting
enough
time for healing their relations.
For instance
, a salesperson
usually
stays out of home for a prolonged period that even the money cannot soar the relations between the person and
family
. Although the monetary crisis can
be avoided
by
working
more
hours
, if the
family
would not be there to spend with, it is fruitless.
To conclude
, increased
working
hours
have their advantages and disadvantages,
however
, the balance between
work
and
family
can be more beneficial in the long run.
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