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Nowadays online shopping is rapidly increasing, buying things on internet became an habit to everyone.

Nowadays online shopping is rapidly increasing, buying things on internet became an habit to everyone. There are many things which are available on internet like groceries, books and air tickets. Advantages for this online shopping is more when compared to the disadvantages. Buying things online is famous trend because of many people. Advantages for buying things on the internet are many. Firstly, the main advantage is offers for the things on internet are more than offline. For instance, buying groceries on internet reduces the time and also online sites are providing many offers. Secondly, everyone looks after fashion and trend before money, this online shopping has more wide range of varieties when compared to offline. Disadvantage for buying things on internet are less because everything is secured. There is a disadvantage like, some online sites does not have any return and refund option. I conclude, buying things online is good until and unless its a fraud site. There are wide range of options when you go with online shopping.
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has more wide range of varieties when compared to offline. Disadvantage for
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buying
things
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online
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IELTS essay Nowadays online shopping is rapidly increasing, buying things on internet became an habit to everyone.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
169 words
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