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Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. However, many people prefer the traditional, classroom training or study. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of both methods. v.1

Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. However, many people prefer the traditional, classroom training or study. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of both methods. v. 1
It is often debated whether a student should enrol in a classroom programme or prefer online classes. In this essay, we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both regular and online courses. Working people benefit the most from online courses because they help them to acquire additional skills/qualifications without quitting their jobs. With the advent of technology every day a new application is developed; hence to be at the top of the game, many workers enrol themselves in online courses to have a successful career. In addition, it gives them the freedom to study at flexible hours and at their own pace. The downside of doing an online course is that students have no one to monitor their progress or clear their doubts. Consequently, they may lose focus on their studies. In a classroom, teachers have a structured course to teach pupil. They have years of experience and knowledge, which they gathered over the years. Sometimes, when a person studies alone, they seem to lose interest in studies. However, it is observed that classroom oriented courses always push students to stay focused. Conversely, students who attend a classroom programme do not have the opportunity to attend the same lecture over and over again. However, online classes are pre-recorded and a student can watch them any number of times to grasp the lessons. To conclude, I would like to say that both the online and traditional method of teaching have their own advantages and disadvantages. It is up to the user to decide what is appropriate for them.
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debated whether a
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should enrol in a classroom
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programme
or prefer
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online
classes. In this essay, we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both regular and
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online
courses.

Working
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people
benefit the most from
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online
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courses
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because
they
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help
them to acquire additional
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skills
/qualifications without quitting their jobs. With the advent of technology every day a new application
is developed
;
hence
to be at the top of the game,
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many
workers enrol themselves in
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online
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courses
to have a successful career.
In addition
, it gives them the freedom to study at flexible hours and at their
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own
pace. The downside of doing an
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online
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course
is that
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students
have no one to monitor their progress or
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clear
their doubts.
Consequently
, they may lose focus on their studies.

In a classroom, teachers have a structured
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
to teach pupil. They have years of experience and knowledge, which they gathered over the years.
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Sometimes
, when a person studies alone, they seem to lose interest in studies.
However
, it
is observed
that classroom oriented
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courses
always push
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students
to stay focused.
Conversely
,
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students
who attend a classroom
Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.
programme
do not have the opportunity to attend the same lecture over and over again.
However
,
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online
classes are pre-recorded and a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
them any number of times to grasp the lessons.

To conclude
, I would like to say that both the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
and traditional method of teaching have their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
advantages and disadvantages. It is up to the user to decide what is appropriate for them.
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17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. However, many people prefer the traditional, classroom training or study. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of both methods. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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