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Nowadays number of advertisments focused on children to what extent agree or disagree

Nowadays number of advertisments focused on children to what extent agree or disagree MBXpq

It has been considered, by plethora of individual that in this modern era, advertising targeting infants. it has pessimistic result. consequently, it should be banned. This essay intends to elaborate the reason why i partially agree with this trend in upcoming paragraph. To begin with, it is sensitive issue that nowadays publicity of products aiming toddlers. The first and foremost point is that children in certain age have lack of ability to make wise judgement about products. However, they are easily attracted towards picture and animation that showed in adds. They insist their parents and become stubborn for that particular product which should ought negative effect on them. For example, A one company broadcast chocolate advertisement in which they illustrates that after eat this chocolate children can grow and become intelligent. so this commercial show false information about their products which was baned by officers in country. On flip side, there are plethora of merits regarding publicity. Firstly, commercial knowledge about new product. there are many productsthat people bought and they don't know how to use them so through publicity they learn about that product. Moreover, advertising industry provide jobs for many people which should help in economic of the world. Furthermore, some advertisement on social issues. for instance, in crona virus people do not obey government instructions so many famous personalities appeal them by advertisement. To conclude, it can be analysed from above discussion that there are abudent of benefits of commercial significances of advertisments target children cannot be overlooked.

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