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Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s lives and should receive more funding. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.3

Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s lives and should receive more funding. with this statement? v. 3
There is no doubt that the news media play a significant role to enable a country with information. It, therefore, has been contemplated by a number of residents that these companies should focus more on local stories, which can gear towards generating impact, rather than other countries' news. However, I do not accord with the statement of a specific area-based news coverage and in this essay, I will explore my views with pertinent examples. One concern is that it is important whether individuals are often getting updated about their surroundings in dire situations, such as natural calamities, war, and so forth. That is to say, relying on international sources seems not only beneficial to a family, but also informative to lead everyone's life. To give an illustrative example, people, who are living a quarantined life during the COVID 19 outbreak in 2020, are banking on special talk shows and daily news updates for the correct information, thus staying healthy and safe from the virus. On the other hand, local news personnel undoubtedly enables a whole nation with a necessary and relevant data, footage, statistics, and so on, despite a biased role that a few journalists triggers. So, this is indeed unfortunate that yellow journalism still exists in many locations because of some predatory organisations and news viewers are turning as victims for believing the prejudiced information. For instance, a recent Harvard Study revealed in late 2019 that 15% of locally established small journalists in South Asia suburban areas publish articles based on bribes. Furthermore, a number of local reports are also blamed by the public for spreading misinformation or fake news in an area. To sum up, while more news enthusiasts are becoming dependable on the international television platforms or radio programmes for the right data, the biaseness view of local reporters has been recognised by people.
There is no doubt that the
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news
media play a significant role to enable a country with information. It,
therefore
, has
been contemplated
by a number of residents that these
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companies
should focus more on
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local
stories, which can gear towards generating impact,
rather
than other countries'
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news
.
However
, I do not accord with the statement of a specific area-based
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news
coverage and in this essay, I will explore my views with pertinent examples.

One concern is that it is
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important
whether individuals are
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often
getting updated about their surroundings in dire situations, such as natural calamities, war, and
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so
forth.
That is
to say, relying on international sources seems not
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only
beneficial to a family,
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but
also
informative to lead everyone's life. To give an illustrative example,
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people
, who are living a quarantined life during the
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COVID 19
outbreak in 2020, are banking on special talk
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shows
and daily
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news
updates for the correct information,
thus
staying healthy and safe from the virus.

On the other hand
,
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local
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news
personnel
undoubtedly
enables a whole nation with a necessary and relevant data, footage, statistics, and
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so
on, despite a biased role that a few journalists triggers.
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So
, this is
indeed
unfortunate that yellow journalism
still
exists in
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many
locations
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because
of
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some
predatory
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organisations
and
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news
viewers are turning as victims for believing the prejudiced information.
For instance
, a recent Harvard Study revealed in late 2019 that 15% of
locally
established
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
journalists in South Asia suburban areas publish articles based on bribes.
Furthermore
, a number of
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local
reports are
also
blamed by the public for spreading misinformation or fake
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news
in an area.

To sum up, while more
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news
enthusiasts are becoming dependable on the international television platforms or radio
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programmes
for the right data, the
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biaseness
view of
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local
reporters has been
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recognised
by
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people
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s lives and should receive more funding. with this statement? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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