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Nowadays, more than million tons of wastes have been being produced which from home everyday and some people claim that not enough of the litters is recycled.

Nowadays, more than million tons of wastes have been being produced which from home everyday and some people claim that not enough of the litters is recycled. RkWoY
Nowadays, more than million tons of wastes have been being produced which from home everyday and some people claim that not enough of the litters is recycled. Therefore, they think the governments should have a policy to increase recycling. It is necessary to say that their governments should take action. For example, providing rubblish bag into each family so that seperate a litter and make it to have value. Many waste; paper, box or steel from home can sale to governments or decrease council tax. Either, the government should provide junk bank that the citizen can deposit recycled waste and inverse to be some money. Moreover, the government should have spot advertisement on television to motivate advantages of recycling. In Thailand, my country, we have “3R” advertisement standing For reuse, reduce and recycle and easy example way to do in house such as using less plastics bag (reduce), reuse take away box or sale some paper. In school teacher teach children how to recycle waste at home and go back to tell their parent and come back to report their teacher. There is one day a week in order that clean school together which help they have a good attitud in cleaning. In conclution, it should be good that the government make some law about waste tax and make people follow the law by give them back some money. Starting give education tivate Windo at school so that when they growth up the will do easier. Go to PC settings to
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million
tons of
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wastes
have been
being produced
which from home

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people
claim that not
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enough
of the litters
is recycled
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they
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think
the
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governments
should have a policy to increase recycling.

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governments
should take action.
For example
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providing
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rubblish
bag into each family
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seperate
a litter and
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make
it to have

value.
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waste
; paper, box or steel from home can sale to
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governments
or decrease

council tax. Either, the
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government
should provide junk bank that the citizen can

deposit recycled
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waste
and inverse to be
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some
money.

Moreover
, the
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government
should have spot advertisement on television to motivate

advantages of recycling. In Thailand, my country, we have “3R” advertisement standing

For reuse,
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reduce
and recycle and easy example way to do in
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house
such as using less

plastics bag (
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reduce
), reuse take away box or sale
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some
paper.

In school teacher teach children how to recycle
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waste
at home and go back to
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tell
their

parent and
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come
back to report their teacher. There is one day a week in order that

clean school together which
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help
they have a
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good
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attitud
in cleaning.

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conclution
, it should be
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government
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make
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some
law about
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waste
tax

and
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make
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people
follow the law by give them back
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some
money. Starting give education
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IELTS essay Nowadays, more than million tons of wastes have been being produced which from home everyday and some people claim that not enough of the litters is recycled.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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