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Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food, than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v.1

Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food, than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 1
It is irrefutable to say that by far food has been the most popular medium over which people socialize. Preparing food at home on special occasions like festivals has been a tradition, however, this trend is gradually changing. Nowadays, people prefer to purchase food rather than cook at home. This essay gingerly delineates the advantages and disadvantages of this trend in the following paragraphs. To begin with, purchasing food allows one to focus on important chores and saves time. Moreover, today's competitive, connected world of ours has made it difficult to take time out for oneself; one would prefer spending this little free time in doing things which gives one happiness, cooking might not be one's first choice. Furthermore, gender stereotype is slowly reducing, as a result, women who were previously associated with household duties are no longer entitled to do them. This makes purchasing food a convenient option. In addition to the above, customizing one's order has also become easier with the advent of online food order and delivery. However, buying food on a daily basis might not be economical. One also can never be sure of the quality of the items prepared. A recent research shows that 60% of the restaurant do not meet the hygiene criteria. Moreover, a recent study shows that the family that cooks meals together tends to stay stronger in times of adversities. Cooking one's own meal ensures that quality is maintained; one can also make sure that the ingredients used are safe and not old. Moreover, if a person in the family has an allergy to certain food items, it is safer to prepare their meals at home. To recapitulate, there is a growing trend of people indulging in meals prepared outside the house, there are various advantages and disadvantages to it. One should make a choice based on one's needs. We must, however, ensure that the food brought from outside is safe and healthy; as the world-famous saying goes' If there is health, there will be wealth', we must ensure that we are healthy.
It is irrefutable to say that by far
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food
has been the most popular medium over which
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people
socialize. Preparing
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food
at home on special occasions like festivals has been a tradition,
however
, this trend is
gradually
changing. Nowadays,
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people
prefer to
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purchase
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food
rather
than cook at home. This essay
gingerly
delineates the advantages and disadvantages of this trend in the following paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, purchasing
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food
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allows
one to focus on
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important
chores and saves
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time
.
Moreover
,
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today
's competitive, connected world of ours has made it difficult to take
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time
out for oneself; one would prefer spending this
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little
free
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time
in doing things which gives one happiness, cooking might not be one's
first
choice.
Furthermore
, gender stereotype is
slowly
reducing,
as a result
, women who were previously associated with household duties are no longer entitled to do them.
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This
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makes
purchasing
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food
a convenient option.
In addition
to the above, customizing one's order has
also
become easier with the advent of online
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food
order and delivery.

However
, buying
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food
on a daily basis might not be economical. One
also
can never be sure of the quality of the items prepared. A recent research
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shows
that 60% of the restaurant do not
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meet
the hygiene criteria.
Moreover
, a recent study
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shows
that the family that cooks
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meals
together tends to stay stronger in
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times
of adversities. Cooking one's
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own
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meal
ensures that quality
is maintained
; one can
also
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make
sure that the ingredients
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used
are safe and not
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old
.
Moreover
, if a person in the family has an allergy to certain
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food
items, it is safer to prepare their
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meals
at home.

To recapitulate, there is a growing trend of
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people
indulging in
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meals
prepared outside the
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house
, there are various advantages and disadvantages to it. One should
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make
a choice based on one's needs. We
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must
,
however
, ensure that the
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food
brought from outside is safe and healthy; as the world-
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famous
saying goes' If there is health, there will be wealth', we
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must
ensure that we are healthy.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food, than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
342 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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