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Nowadays more Nd more people preferred to have child at later age. What are the reason of it? Is advantage outweigh disadvantage?

Nowadays more Nd more people preferred to have child at later age. What are the reason of it? Is advantage outweigh disadvantage? pRPEL
family planning is an important concern for today's your. Majority chunk of the society has been opined to have a baby planning at the late thirties. As having high merits of given phone on I positively tale stands of it. The upcoming paragraphs would further cast light on possible reasons for my viewpoint. To commence with my first and foremost reason is that, at unmature age majority of people not settled perfectly in their personal as well as professional life. As we can see the majority of the disputes are emerging at in mature age in all aspects of personal as well as professional life. As a result, unhealthy mental, emotional and financial situation affect the growth of the foetus. To exemplify it, research saws that due to the above reasons chances of miscarriage high. Further, my view point can be made evident by adding a numerous merits for stated Idea. At a later age many of people have capability to trained their mind to handle the situation while having it all are negligible and not affect the mental emotional part of life. So that, happy and healthy body can be able to birth highly intelligent babies. Moreover, later age also bring a financial security. Because of having a comfortable and materialistic life, chances of having diseases is less. Consequently, future child will have no threats of genetic disorder due their parents healthy. To recapitulated, I personally infer that pregnancy at older age brings numerous benefits as it will grow foetus without affecting the stress of mother because of favorable accountancy of physical emotional and mental factor. Given this situation, it is recommended that, later age baby planning is a much preferable it not only benefits for child but also for parents in all aspects of life.
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high merits of
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positively
tale stands of it. The upcoming paragraphs would
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cast light on possible reasons for my viewpoint.

To commence with my
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and foremost reason is that, at
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unmature
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age
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people
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. As we can
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the majority of the disputes are emerging at in mature
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age
in all aspects of personal
as well
as professional
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life
.
As a result
, unhealthy mental, emotional and financial situation affect the growth of the
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foetus
. To exemplify it, research saws that due to the above reasons chances of miscarriage high.

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, my view point can
be made
evident by adding a numerous
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have capability to trained their mind to handle the situation while
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it all are negligible and not affect the mental emotional part of
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.
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that, happy and healthy body can be able to birth
highly
intelligent babies.
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, later
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also
bring a financial security.
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of
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a comfortable and materialistic
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, chances of
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diseases is less.
Consequently
, future child will have no threats of genetic disorder due their parents healthy.

To recapitulated, I
personally
infer that pregnancy at older
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age
brings numerous benefits as it will grow
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foetus
without affecting the
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stress
of mother
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because
of favorable accountancy of physical emotional and mental factor.
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this situation, it
is recommended
that, later
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age
baby planning is a much preferable it not
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only
benefits for child
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for parents in all aspects of
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.
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IELTS essay Nowadays more Nd more people preferred to have child at later age. What are the reason of it? Is advantage outweigh disadvantage?

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  American English
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297 words
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