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Nowadays more and more people prefer to wear fashionable clothes. Is this a good or a bad trend?

IN MODERN WORLD, A NUMEROUS NUMBER OF PEOPLE LIKE TO DRESSUP IN TRENDY WAY. IN THIS ESSAY, I WILL POINT WHETHER IT IS POSTIVE OR NEGATIVE DEPENDING UPON THE DIVERSE SITUATIONS. ON POSITIVE SIDE, MAJORITY OF THEM ARE COMFORTABLE IN FASHION RELATED ITEMS. TO BE PRECISE, MAINLY ON THE OCCASSION LIKE MARIAGES, PARTY TYPE PROGRAMS WHILE WEARING THIS THEY FEEL MORE CONFIDENCE. FOR EXAMPLE, MORE THAN 95 % OF FASHION MODEL THEY ARRANGE THEIR DRESSES IN A LATEST TRENDING WEARS AND THEY LIVE UPON THE NEWEST FORM OF LIFE. HENCE, ALL AGE GROUPS FALL ON THIS CATEGORIES AND HAVE SUPERIOR POWER IN SENSE OF ATTIRES. ON CONTRARY SISE, FEW AMONG THE SOCIETY DOESINT WANT TO CRTICIZE THEIR
IN MODERN WORLD, A NUMEROUS NUMBER OF
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PEOPLE
LIKE TO
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DRESSUP
IN TRENDY WAY. IN THIS ESSAY, I WILL POINT WHETHER IT IS
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POSTIVE
OR
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NEGATIVE
DEPENDING UPON THE DIVERSE SITUATIONS. ON
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POSITIVE
SIDE,
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MAJORITY OF
THEM ARE COMFORTABLE IN FASHION RELATED ITEMS. TO BE PRECISE,
MAINLY
ON THE
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OCCASSION
LIKE
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MARIAGES
, PARTY TYPE PROGRAMS WHILE WEARING THIS THEY FEEL MORE CONFIDENCE.
FOR EXAMPLE
, MORE THAN 95 % OF FASHION MODEL THEY ARRANGE THEIR DRESSES IN
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A
LATEST TRENDING WEARS AND THEY
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LIVE
UPON THE NEWEST FORM OF LIFE.
HENCE
, ALL AGE GROUPS FALL ON
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THIS
CATEGORIES AND HAVE SUPERIOR POWER IN SENSE OF ATTIRES. ON CONTRARY
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SISE
, FEW AMONG THE SOCIETY
Did you mean “doesn’t” (= verb)?
DOESINT
WANT TO
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CRTICIZE
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THEIR

IELTS essay Nowadays more and more people prefer to wear fashionable clothes. Is this a good or a bad trend?

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