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Nowadays, more and more parents are organizing free time activities for their children. What are the negatives and positives of this trends?

Nowadays, more and more parents are organizing free time activities for their children. What are the negatives and positives of this trends? WmGlk

It is true that parents are interested in making a lot of free activities for their children to enhance their lifestyles. although some would disagree with this statement because some of them can fail to participate in this for some reasons. On the one hand, doing everything in spare time could help the youngers a lot of advantages such as sleeping, exploring on INternet, doing homework or having workouts. Each kid has their own favourite and they will do it very clearly, they just imbue excitement and kick them back from stress or evidence. However, organizing activities could make children get away from bad things in their lives, technology, and glueing on computer screens. Moreover, outdoor activities can help kids improve social skills such as public speaking, independence, ways to survive from danger or forest… In conclusion, although parents might be capable of making more informed selections, children should be made free to follow their interests. In my opinion, they ought to allow kids to juggle multiple roles in diverse settings to organically identify their potential.

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, organizing activities could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 children This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 away from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
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lives
, technology, and Possible spelling mistake found.gluing
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 on computer screens. Moreover
, outdoor activities can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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 kids This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
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 social This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
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danger
 or forest…

In conclusion
, although parents might be capable of making more informed selections, children should be made
 free to follow their interests. In my opinion, they ought to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 kids to juggle multiple roles in diverse settings to organically
 identify their potential. 