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On the other hand Sydney follows different trend, with start and end of the year have high temperatures reaching almost 25 degrees. However, Sydney has cooler June, July and August compared to other two cities. This is the where Sydney temperature comes below 20 degrees. Sydney and New York people have more sunny mornings with 2453 and 2535 average annual hours respectively. In contrast, London receives less than half of them

On the other hand Sydney follows different trend, with start and end of the year have high temperatures reaching almost 25 degrees. However, Sydney has cooler June, July and August compared to other two cities. This is the where Sydney temperature comes below 20 degrees. Sydney and New York people have more sunny mornings with 2453 and 2535 average annual hours respectively. In contrast, London receives less than half of them 3AgBX
On the other hand Sydney follows different trend, with start and end of the year have high temperatures reaching almost 25 degrees. However, Sydney has cooler June, July and August compared to other two cities. This is the where Sydney temperature comes below 20 degrees. Sydney and New York people have more sunny mornings with 2453 and 2535 average annual hours respectively. In contrast, London receives less than half of them
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of the year have high temperatures reaching almost 25 degrees.
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below 20 degrees.

Sydney and New York
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have more sunny mornings with 2453 and 2535 average annual hours
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IELTS essay On the other hand Sydney follows different trend, with start and end of the year have high temperatures reaching almost 25 degrees. However, Sydney has cooler June, July and August compared to other two cities. This is the where Sydney temperature comes below 20 degrees. Sydney and New York people have more sunny mornings with 2453 and 2535 average annual hours respectively. In contrast, London receives less than half of them

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