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effects of professional sports on children

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In today's society it has become more and more typical for young children ranging from ages four to seventeen to sit around all day watching television. This inactive lifestyle is contributing to the onset of obesity at an increasingly early age. Being so overweight causes low self-esteem, and depression in children. Playing sports helps kids to become more active and helps build long lasting friendships while also promoting discipline.

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 friendships while also
 promoting discipline. 