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My name is Suzan Ahmed, I was awarded a master's degree in Microbiology - Bacteria - at King Abdulaziz University. I had published a scientific paper on the journal of Biodiversity in 2018. After graduation, I volunteered in the health field. I have been involved in organizing, data collection and inclusion in. During period stay home, I worked remote as a designer to design presentions by using Powerpoint program, I am a member in psychology club at king Abdulaziz University. I am looking forward to complete my study. I am interested in cultivation and natural, so that I have some plants in my home like Aloe Vera, mint, and palm and I intend to cultivate some vegetables like potatoes, chili pepper and some leaves like lettuce and I was attended some courses about it.
My name is
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Suzan
Ahmed, I
was awarded
a master's degree in Microbiology
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Bacteria
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at King Abdulaziz University. I had published a scientific paper on the journal of Biodiversity in 2018. After graduation, I volunteered in the health field. I have
been involved
in organizing, data collection and inclusion in. During period stay home, I worked remote as a designer to design
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presentions
by using
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Powerpoint
program, I am a member in psychology club at king Abdulaziz University. I am looking forward
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to complete
my study. I
am interested
in cultivation and natural,
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so
that I have
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some
plants in my home like Aloe Vera, mint, and palm and I intend to cultivate
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some
vegetables like potatoes, chili pepper and
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some
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leaves
like
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lettuce and
I
was attended
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some
courses about it.
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IELTS essay Talk about myself shortly

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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