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Describe yourself, your life, your likes and dislikes, family, friends, and future dreams.

Describe yourself, your life, your likes and dislikes, family, friends, and future dreams. 7aMrb
I’m an extrovert, I have a really strong personality and beliefs that no one can change, I like going out but also staying in, I like suspense movies and I’m a vegan, I have the weird and odd belief that every specie deserves to live and I do not like the abuse and exploitation that animals have to go through nowadays. I enjoy little things but also love adrenaline and big moments, I can talk to anyone who’s around me and I try to be as positive as I can. I also consider myself as a person who respects if I’m being respected, I do not like racism and I am against every part of it, I want equal rights for both genders and I fight for inequality, I support the woman but I also hear the man. I live in Mexico City with my familia, Mom, Dad, and two sisters. They support me a lot in every decision I make and they have been for me in every situation I need them to. I have many friends but I have 7 special best friends that I love and spending time with them is one of the things I enjoy the most. My best friend since I was 6 years old is Ines Zamudio. We have been together all our lives and we even got a tattoo together. I have a lot of aspirations for the future, dreams, goals and life experiences that would make me feel whole, happy and in peace with myself. I really want to embrace veganism and take it to a next level, change the perspective that people have about it, I want to open a vegan restaurant, live with my friends in an apartment here in Mexico or elsewhere, I want to study in Madrid for a semester and in New York as well, I would love to open a modern museum with my moms art, my writings, memes, art, and different creative stuff. I tend to live an extraordinary life and make a lot of memories, I would love to work on a magazine and write the articles I want to, I would love to write a book to, enjoy my work and one day maybe settle down, build a family and have kids, but that plans are really the last thing I want to do.
I’m an extrovert, I have a
really
strong personality and beliefs that no one can
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, I like going out
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but
also
staying in, I like suspense movies and I’m a vegan, I have the weird and odd belief that every specie deserves to
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live
and I do not like the abuse and exploitation that animals
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have to
go through nowadays. I enjoy
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little
things
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but
also
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love
adrenaline and
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big
moments, I can talk to anyone who’s around me and I try to be as
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positive
as I can.
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I
also
consider myself as a person who respects if I’m
being respected
, I do not like
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racism and
I am against every part of it, I
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want
equal rights for both genders and I fight for inequality, I support the woman
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but
I
also
hear the
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man
.
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I
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live
in Mexico City with my
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familia
, Mom, Dad, and two sisters. They support me a lot in every decision I
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make and
they have been for me in every situation I need them to. I have
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many
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friends
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I have 7 special best
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friends
that I
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love
and spending time with them is one of the things I enjoy the most. My best
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friend
since I was 6 years
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old
is Ines
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Zamudio
. We have been together all our
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lives and
we even
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got
a tattoo together.

I have
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a lot of
aspirations for the future, dreams, goals and life experiences that would
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make
me feel whole, happy and in peace with myself. I
really
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want
to embrace veganism and take it to a
next
level,
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change
the perspective that
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people
have about it, I
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want
to open a vegan restaurant,
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with my
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friends
in an apartment here in Mexico or elsewhere, I
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want
to study in Madrid for a semester and in New York
as well
, I would
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love
to open a modern museum with my moms art, my writings, memes, art, and
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different
creative stuff.

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I
tend to
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live
an extraordinary life and
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make
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a lot of
memories, I would
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love
to work on a magazine and write the articles I
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to, I would
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to write a book to, enjoy my work and one day maybe settle down, build a family and have kids,
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that plans are
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the last thing I
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IELTS essay Describe yourself, your life, your likes and dislikes, family, friends, and future dreams.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
392 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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