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Nowadays media should include good news in their publications. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

Nowadays media should include good news in their publications. v. 1
It is argued that news coverage should focus on positive news. Although I partly agree with this statement, I believe that media should be continued to report negative news when it is necessary. To begin with, publishing good news has numerous positive influences on society. Firstly, in a world where negative news seems to take front and center, it is important that the public is kept informed about good things which are happening all over the world. This news can have a positive impact on public morale. For example, people who suffer from cancer get informed that new drugs have been discovered which will care about their disease, their life expectancy rises in them. So, they can keep fighting against their disease. Secondly, people of society are interested in either reading or watching good news and they usually spend an amount of money to buy this type of magazine. In this condition, the profit of publishers grows significantly, which allows them to report positive things. From another angle, I opine that it would be misguided to introduce restrictions on the reporting of tragic news events. The man reason would be that lack of information about bad events can have harmful consequences. For instance, global warming in one of the important issues these days. Unless media increases people’s awareness about their actions, next-generation cannot live on Earth. Therefore, the media must act as watchdogs in the fight against global warming by reporting bad news. Additionally, without information about the beliefs of other people which can a negative impact on society, some people especially young individuals can repeat them. In fact, through silence against some ideologies, the number of terrorist attacks has increased significantly in the Middle East and European, where most victims are innocent people. The best example would be Islamic State, which tries to get youth attention to killing people contrary to their beliefs. In this circumstance, news can give a lot of useful information about this ideology in order to prevent young people from being attracted to it and reduce their criminal acts. From what has been discussed, while I agree that reporting good news has personal and financial benefits, in my opinion, the media should cover bad news to reduce environmental and international issues in the world.
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that
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coverage should focus on
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positive
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news
. Although I partly
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agree
with this statement, I believe that
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media
should
be continued
to report
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negative
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news
when it is necessary.

To
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begin
with, publishing
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good
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news
has numerous
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positive
influences on society.
Firstly
, in a world where
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negative
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news
seems to take front and center, it is
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important
that the public is
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kept
informed about
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good
things which are happening all over the world. This
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news
can have a
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positive
impact on public morale.
For example
,
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people
who suffer from cancer
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get
informed that
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new
drugs have
been discovered
which will care about their disease, their life expectancy rises in them.
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So
, they can
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keep
fighting against their disease.
Secondly
,
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people
of society
are interested
in either reading or watching
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good
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news and
they
usually
spend an amount of money to
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buy
this type of magazine. In this condition, the profit of publishers grows
significantly
, which
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allows
them to report
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positive
things.

From another angle, I opine that it would
be misguided
to introduce restrictions on the reporting of tragic
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news
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events
. The
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man
reason would be that lack of information about
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bad
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events
can have harmful consequences.
For instance
, global warming in one of the
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important
issues these days. Unless
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media
increases
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people’s
awareness about their actions,
next
-generation cannot
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live
on Earth.
Therefore
, the
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media
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
act as watchdogs in the fight against global warming by reporting
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bad
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news
.
Additionally
, without information about the beliefs of other
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people
which can a
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negative
impact on society,
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some
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people
especially
young individuals can repeat them. In fact, through silence against
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some
ideologies, the number of terrorist attacks has increased
significantly
in the Middle East and European, where most victims are innocent
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people
. The best example would be Islamic State, which tries to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
youth attention to killing
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people
contrary to their beliefs. In this circumstance,
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news
can give
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a lot of
useful information about this ideology in order to
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prevent
young
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people
from
being attracted
to it and
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reduce
their criminal acts.

From what has
been discussed
, while I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that reporting
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good
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news
has personal and financial benefits, in my opinion, the
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media
should cover
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bad
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news
to
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reduce
environmental and international issues in the world.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays media should include good news in their publications. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
379 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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