Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Nowadays many people working from home. Some think it is beneficial to employee, others think it may distract the family routine. What is your opinion? v.1

Nowadays many people working from home. Some think it is beneficial to employee, others think it may distract the family routine. What is your opinion? v. 1
In these days, people are getting opportunities to work from their residence. Although some people contemplate that employees are being benefited by doing work form the home, others believed that family life may be hampered by this working style. In my opinion, people are enjoying more because of the working opportunities be staying at the house. The first and foremost reason why employees are benefited is that their working hours are flexible. That means they are not bound to work or present at a specific time in a day. If employees can complete their tasks within a time period by staying at home, then they get their remuneration. Therefore, it is not necessary to see whether they work at night or day. Some offices, for example, have regulations to remain present from 9 am to 6 m whether employees have duties or not. By working from home employees get more free time, which can be spent with the family after finishing their tasks at home. Another benefit is that employees can wok more if they get chance from their home because they do not have to face traffic congestions. A recent study has recommended that employers can increase their employees’ productivity and efficiency threefold by allowing them to work from the home. Moreover, employees are also benefited because they do not have to bear transportation costs and face huge pollution on the road. In conclusion, working from the house brings many positive aspects in the employees' life by having opportunities to work in a relaxed working schedule, to avoid traffic jams, pollution and to spend more time with the loving ones.
In these days,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are getting opportunities to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from their residence. Although
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
contemplate that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
are
being benefited
by doing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
form the home, others believed that family life may
be hampered
by this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
style. In my opinion,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are enjoying more
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
opportunities be staying at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

The
first
and foremost reason why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
are benefited
is that their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
hours are flexible. That means they are not bound to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
or present at a specific
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
in a day. If
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
can complete their tasks within a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
period by staying at home, then they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
their remuneration.
Therefore
, it is not necessary to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
whether they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
at night or day.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
offices,
for example
, have regulations to remain present from 9 am to 6 m whether
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
have duties or not. By
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
from home
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, which can
be spent
with the family after finishing their tasks at home.

Another benefit is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
can wok more if they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
chance from their home
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
face traffic congestions. A recent study has recommended that employers can increase their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees’
productivity and efficiency threefold by allowing them to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from the home.
Moreover
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
are
also
benefited
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
bear transportation costs and face huge pollution on the road.

In conclusion
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
brings
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
aspects in the employees' life by having opportunities to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in a relaxed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
schedule, to avoid traffic jams, pollution and to spend more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
with the loving ones.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
You can never understand one language until you understand at least two.
Geoffrey Willans

IELTS essay Nowadays many people working from home. Some think it is beneficial to employee, others think it may distract the family routine. What is your opinion? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts