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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. 02P1
Traveling has become an essential for every individual in today's time. A number of people believe, it might have a negative impact on the countries that are being traveled to, while others have a different opinion about it. I believe that traveling has a very positive impact on both the country and the people. People have been traveling to other countries for a very long period of time, be it for trading or exploring cultures and places.
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opinion about it. I believe that traveling has a
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impact on both the country and the
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have been traveling to other countries for a
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long period of time, be it for trading or exploring cultures and places.

IELTS essay Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to.

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2 paragraphs
77 words
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