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Nowadays many people prefer to visit dangerous places to enjoy their holidays . Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays many people prefer to visit dangerous places to enjoy their holidays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? MQX9

Undoubtedly, in the contemporary era, holidays play an imperative role in everybody's life. There has been a significant increase in the number of people travelling to inhabitable places. Most of them are driven by a passion to achieve something. This essay will certainly advantageous despite a few inevitable drawbacks. To commence with, there are various advantages travelling to difficult places. One of the biggest benefits of undertaking difficult journeys is that they improves one's confidence in one's abilities as well as it will help in economic growth and employment generation

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IELTS essay Nowadays many people prefer to visit dangerous places to enjoy their holidays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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