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Moslty individuals say that the main enviromental issue of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. however, other say that there are more important enivromental problems. I will discuss my both view point in the subsequent paragraphes.

Moslty individuals say that the main enviromental issue of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. however, other say that there are more important enivromental problems. I will discuss my both view point in the subsequent paragraphes. 1VelG
To ember with, mainly enviromental issue created by harmful gages because in the advancement technology many company's makes different types of machines and devices in addition spread out damaging on humankind and animals life. for example, in the past mankind hunting the animals but at this time government should ban the hunting of animals. Furthermore, In these day's lost international animal's such as, elephant and do not meet in state is king of forest like lion and tiger because with the help of demolish evoromental day to day is happening death the animals as result, natural things are finised in the world. to condude, According to me, there are many thinks to create enviromental problems but do control this happening in our head.
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mainly
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enviromental
issue created by harmful
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gages
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because
in the advancement technology
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many
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company
's
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makes
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different
types of machines and devices
in addition
spread out damaging on humankind and
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animals
life.
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for
example, in the past mankind hunting the
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animals
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but
at this time
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government
should ban the hunting of
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animals
.
Furthermore
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these day
's lost international animal's such as, elephant and do not
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meet
in state is king of forest like lion and tiger
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because
with the
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help
of demolish
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evoromental
day to day is happening death the
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animals
as result, natural things are
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finised
in the world.
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to
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condude
, According to me, there are
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many
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thinks
to create
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enviromental
problems
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but
do control this happening in our head.
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IELTS essay Moslty individuals say that the main enviromental issue of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. however, other say that there are more important enivromental problems. I will discuss my both view point in the subsequent paragraphes.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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