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Nowadays many people judge others on social status and wealth

Nowadays many people judge others on social status and wealth Q2YoX
According to the given situation, the following discussion is going to be made on that how nowadays people are being judged more on the social life in front of the world and on their wealth rather than to observe either they are trust worthy and loyal. Various community nowadays think that being socially active and indulged between the crowd is good and makes them comfortable and more trustable. For e. g. - a cricketer who earns a lot of money and has various luxury bungalows, even has various social relations and tries to engage with the audience is a extremely nice person in the eyes of society because they feel like it is good to be actively participating and even they also get a push for their like owing a good amount of property in somewhat future, which is a really beneficial thing and is acceptable. On the other hand, a number of community thinks that an ideal person is who has a lot of fame, recognization and bank balance as it is their priority on the contrary the process of it they forget that a human being should have moral values and pride. A small vendor approached a well known businessmen to make a deal but later on got to know that person was a fraud and was using him for illegal purposes, that's why it's necessary0 to determine the basic things about someone for believing in them. To conclude, I would like to say that the ancient ways to judge someone were more useful owing to the fact helped in understanding a citizen more precisely as in today's era it has become impossible because of their incorrect perception.
According to the
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given
situation, the following discussion is going to
be made
on that how nowadays
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people
are
being judged
more on the social life in front of the world and on their wealth
rather
than to observe either they are trust worthy and loyal.

Various community nowadays
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think
that being
socially
active and indulged between the crowd is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
them comfortable and more trustable. For
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e. g.
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a cricketer who earns
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a lot of
money and has various luxury bungalows, even has various social relations and tries to engage with the audience is
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a
extremely
nice person in the eyes of society
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because
they feel like it is
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good
to be
actively
participating and even they
also
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get
a push for their like owing a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
amount of property in somewhat future, which is a
really
beneficial thing and is acceptable.

On the other hand
, a number of community
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that an ideal person is who has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
fame,
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recognization
and bank balance as it is their priority
on the contrary
the process of it they forget that a human being should have moral values and pride. A
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
vendor approached a well known businessmen to
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make
a deal
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but
later on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
to know that person was a fraud and was using him for illegal purposes, that's why it's necessary0 to determine the basic things about someone for believing in them.

To conclude
, I would like to say that the ancient ways to judge someone were more useful owing to the fact
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
in understanding a citizen more
precisely
as in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's era it has become impossible
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of their incorrect perception.
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IELTS essay Nowadays many people judge others on social status and wealth

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
5.5
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