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Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or using public transport. Does this trend have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or using public transport. Does this trend have more advantages or more disadvantages? dbVX
It is well said that Unity is the strength. The work done in team results into more reliable and efficient product. Few people believe that good team work is what makes companies more successful whereas, some thoughts point towards the great leadership quality which approach the excellence of the organization. In this essay, I will focus on both the sides of coin and accordingly mention my views. In starters, describing my views on team work, here the work has been distributed evenly among all the team members, which results in rapid development and the reliable product. This is the key feature that most of the organization heads toward the success. Team work usually teaches the adjustment and communication skills to every individual which helps in good and relevant communication with clients. This quality help in binding the clients for longer period of time and make them believe in the organization potential. For instance, recently, in my organization team work leads to the grabbing of a huge project. On other hand, fewer believe that it is more essential to have a good leader for the success of the companies which is also true at some extent. Firstly, being working in team it is also essential to have a great team leader to manage the team in proper way. Otherwise, everyone would likely to do their work by their own which may happen in clashes in a team. Secondly, It is also crucial for every team leader to work as a team with all the team members. As an example mentioned prior, there is an equal effort of team leader to get that vast project who leads us in correct way with great responsibility. In conclusion, the success of any organization is purely dependent on the great team work and the team leader who leads the folks in proper manner. As it is said that a human could not walk properly with only one leg, similarly the team work done by team members and the team leader are equally essential for the companies' success.
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work
done in
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team
results into more reliable and efficient product. Few
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people
believe that
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good
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team
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work
is what
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makes
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companies
more successful whereas,
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some
thoughts point towards the
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great
leadership quality which approach the excellence of the
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organization
. In this essay, I will focus on both the sides of coin and
accordingly
mention my views.

In starters, describing my views on
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team
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work
, here the
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work
has
been distributed
evenly
among all the
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team
members, which results in rapid development and the reliable product. This is the key feature that most of the
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organization
heads toward the
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success
.
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Team
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work
usually
teaches the adjustment and communication
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skills
to every individual which
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helps
in
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good
and relevant communication with clients. This quality
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help
in binding the clients for longer period of time and
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make
them believe in the
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organization
potential.
For instance
, recently, in my
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organization
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team
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work
leads to the grabbing of a huge project.

On other hand, fewer believe that it is more essential to have a
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good
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leader
for the
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success
of the
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companies
which is
also
true at
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some
extent.
Firstly
, being working in
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it is
also
essential to have a
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great
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team
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leader
to manage the
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team
in proper way.
Otherwise
, everyone would likely to do their
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work
by their
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own
which may happen in clashes in a
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team
.
Secondly
, It is
also
crucial for every
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leader
to
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work
as a
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with all the
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team
members. As an example mentioned prior, there is an equal effort of
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team
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leader
to
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get
that vast project who leads us in correct way with
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great
responsibility.

In conclusion
, the
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success
of any
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organization
is
purely
dependent on the
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great
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team
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work
and the
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team
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leader
who leads the folks in proper manner. As it
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that a human could not walk
properly
with
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only
one leg,
similarly
the
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team
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work
done by
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team
members and the
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team
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leader
are
equally
essential for the
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companies
'
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success
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or using public transport. Does this trend have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
342 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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