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nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation what might this be the case what could be the disadvantages of being self employed give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In this 21st century, people are being more independent and self-employed and prefer to become a boss rather than working in a company. I prefer being freelancer to work for others. However, many people prefer to work in a company or organization due to the fear of their business failure and losses. They believe that owning own business is more risky because there are fluctuations of profits and losses so, they think that they will be paid monthly whether the company is in profit or loss. Personally I really don't like to work under others so, I prefer being the owner of the company which allows me to gain more knowledge and experience to tackle with everything situation. Though there are some drawback of being self-employed I would love to have my own business so that I can give opportunity to other needy people to be employed(To work for others is working under others). I have recently read a book named "woman power" where a woman own a business and provides job to many jobless people. I always dream of having own business with the purpose to provide skills and job to many women who have been harassed and raped. To sum up, I would rather be self-reliant and head of the business than to work for others with the intent to make women independent so that they would not have to relay on their parents and husband for their livelihood.
In this 21st century,
people
are being more independent and self-employed and
prefer
to become a boss
rather
than working in a
company
. I
prefer
being freelancer to
work
for others.
However
,
many
people
prefer
to
work
in a
company
or organization due to the fear of their
business
failure and losses. They believe that owning
own
business
is more risky
because
there are fluctuations of profits and losses
so
, they
think
that they will
be paid
monthly whether the
company
is in profit or loss.
Personally
I
really
don't like to
work
under others
so
, I
prefer
being the owner of the
company
which
allows
me to gain more knowledge and experience to tackle with everything situation. Though there are
some
drawback of being self-employed I would
love
to have my
own
business
so
that I can give opportunity to
other
needy
people
to
be employed
(To
work
for others is working under others). I have recently read a book named
"
woman power
"
where a woman
own
a
business
and provides job to
many
jobless
people
. I always dream of having
own
business
with the purpose to provide
skills
and job to
many
women who have
been harassed
and raped. To sum up, I would
rather
be self-reliant and head of the
business
than to
work
for others with the intent to
make
women independent
so
that they would not
have to
relay on their parents and husband for their livelihood.
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IELTS essay nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation what might this be the case what could be the disadvantages of being self employed give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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