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The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the
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alloted
pictograph
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describes
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process
of
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bottes
.
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wasted
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glass


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overall
, it is
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viVidly
that the poem recycling
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process
of wasted
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glass
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bottles
comprises
overall
stages. The
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process
initiates from
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cellechny
toasted recycled
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glass
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bottles
and
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tenmimedes
at wed
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Lod
bottle.

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seen


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first
stage, wasted all battles we collected from
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the a
mashed and point storage
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Haken
it +to Collection where all the wasted
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glass
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bottles
stores in it. After that,
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bottles
are transport from
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stenage
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startion
to
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necycling
factory by touch.

At the second
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steige
, Wasted
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bottles
passed through high-pressure water. Bay After completion of this
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process
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bottles
turned into three
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different
glasses such as deer, green and brown. AD

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this
three glasses movie Glosses
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tudmad
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imo
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glass
factory and
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glass
pieces in
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factony
. The
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glass
pieces
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transisted
in between
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furanace
where Furnace temperature is around Goo'c-
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Seo
'c.
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it


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turned
into recycled liquid
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glass
and liquid
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glass
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im
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new
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added
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glass
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mould
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sprepond
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IELTS essay The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
167 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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