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Nowadays many people choose readymade foods and refuse to cook at home Why do you think it happens What are advantages and disadvantages of such choice v.2

Nowadays many people choose readymade foods and refuse to cook at home Why do you think it happens What are advantages and disadvantages of such choice v. 2
We live in such an era where almost everything is available at our doorstep within minutes. There are many reasons why people opt for instant food items but every facility comes along with pros and cons which I shall discuss in below paragraphs. There are numerous reasons why people largely go for ready-made food over home cooked food. Many families were both husband and wife are working do not find enough time to cook because of their rigorous work commitments. In addition to this reason, they also have to take some time out from hectic schedule to look after their children and old parents. Also, individuals who live alone are often lethargic to cook for themselves. There are few advantages of choosing ready-made foods. The first and foremost reason is saving time. Time is priceless and this saved time be well spent with their children and parents. In case of individuals who are living independently, can focus better on career and have ready-made food as per convenience. People can try different cuisines anytime they wish without creating any fuss in the kitchen. For instance, it is often seen that pregnant women crave for different kind of foods and desserts which can be fulfilled instantly by ready to cook food. If time is money, then, health is wealth. The human body requires balanced diet and outside food often contains a high amount of fats, sugar and salt which is immensely deleterious. Although they are cheap and easy to prepare but it can lead to chronic diseases in long run. For instance, obesity and diabetes are some common problems which are caused by these foods. To put it in nutshell, I pen down saying that, although opting for ready to eat foods offers great convenient but not at the cost of health.
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in such an era where almost everything is available at our doorstep within minutes. There are
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opt for instant
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items
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along with pros and cons which I shall discuss in below paragraphs.

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reasons
why
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people
largely
go for ready-made
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food
over home cooked
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.
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families were both husband and wife are working do not find
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to cook
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of their rigorous work commitments.
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out from hectic schedule to look after their children and
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parents.
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, individuals who
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alone are
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lethargic to cook for themselves.

There are few advantages of choosing ready-made
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foods
. The
first
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is saving
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time
.
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is priceless and this saved
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be well spent with their children and parents. In case of individuals who are living
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food
as per convenience.
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cuisines anytime they wish without creating any fuss in the kitchen.
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often
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that pregnant women crave for
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different
kind of
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foods
and desserts which can
be fulfilled
instantly
by ready to cook food.

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time
is money, then, health is wealth. The human body requires
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balanced
diet and outside
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food
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contains a high amount of fats, sugar and salt which is
immensely
deleterious. Although they are
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cheap
and easy to prepare
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it can lead to chronic diseases in long run.
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, obesity and diabetes are
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some
common problems which
are caused
by these foods.

To put it in nutshell, I pen down saying that, although opting for ready to eat
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foods
offers great convenient
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but
not at the cost of health.
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IELTS essay Nowadays many people choose readymade foods and refuse to cook at home Why do you think it happens What are advantages and disadvantages of such choice v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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