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Nowadays many people are moving abroad to study and work. What are tha advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

Nowadays many people are moving abroad to study and work. What are tha advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? 3Lppw
Nowadays, many individuals decide to immigrate to a foreign country to get education or find an employment. This essay will discuss pros and cos of this trend. One of the advantages changing the living place to another state is having new education and job opportunities. People who decide to live in a more economically developed countries than their own will definitely have better chances to obtain high quality schooling and much more highly paid working opportunities. Another advantage of changing residency to an overseas country is that one can learn new langauges as well as meet new people and learn new culture which will definitely help him or her to broaden their horizen. However, one of the drawbacks of this trend is people will face with plenty of obstacles while starting to live in a new country the first of which is definitely language barrier.
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IELTS essay Nowadays many people are moving abroad to study and work. What are tha advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

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  American English
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145 words
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