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The image below shows the different stages involved in one method of making coffee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The following picture presents the distinctive step related to the process of forming coffee. There was a long movement from growth coffee in the hot countries like Brazil, Kenya to finish the package and transported all over the world. Through 9 steps of production and worker contribution finally the product is created. To begin with coffee beans are haversted by the farmer then it sorted according to their quality to be sure that the best coffee beans are sold to the customers. In addiction, beans is cleaned by water and dried in sun for 4 weeks. Last but not least, those seeds are sent to the factory to process and package in the sacks.
The following picture presents the distinctive step related to the process of forming coffee.

There was a long movement from growth coffee in the hot countries like Brazil, Kenya to finish the package and transported all over the world. Through 9 steps of production and worker contribution
finally
the product
is created
.

To
begin
with coffee beans are
haversted
by the farmer then it sorted according to their quality to be sure that the best coffee beans
are sold
to the customers. In addiction, beans
is cleaned
by water and dried in sun for 4 weeks. Last
but
not least, those seeds are
sent
to the factory to process and package in the sacks.
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IELTS essay The image below shows the different stages involved in one method of making coffee.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
114 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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