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Nowadays, lots of media, including newspapers, magazines, television, radio, and even the internet, are publishing stories of people’s private lives. Should this practice be banned?

Nowadays, lots of media, including newspapers, magazines, television, radio, and even the internet, are publishing stories of people’s private lives. Should this practice be banned? D6r3m
Due to increasing competition among medley of different media like newspaper, magazine, radio and internet printing the stories of individual’s privacy to gain the popularity rather than publishing the current situation like what is happening in the country and what difficulties citizens are facing. These kinds of practices should be prohibited. To begin with, there are several reasons which impact ordinary people. For example, youngsters try to follow celebrities when they fascinated by their lifestyles and also pupils make hero and heroines to their role models which will lead them to on the wrong path. Subsequently, the press publishes the private matters of celebrities their new boyfriends, girlfriend’s only for the sake of fame but ordinary people try to follow their lifestyle in real life and think that marriages are not that much important as before so they lose trust in love and marriage. Moreover, teenagers try to attempt such kinds of stunts, in reality, whatever they watch on television they favorite hero/heroines doing, the result of this, they meet with a serious accident. Additionally, people are not aware about the issue like lack of education, sex ratio, corruption, the main cause behind this is fake and the worst media which only shows the stars and politicians on various sources; hence, no one came forward to solve this issue in the nation. Furthermore, media have to focus on important matters only rather than publishing anyone’s affair publicly. To conclude everything, publishing different news and articles about denizen’s privacy through various media platforms should be stopped. It is my earnest request to the government that these practices should be banned permanently and make some obligations to handle this situation.
Due to increasing competition among medley of
different
media
like newspaper, magazine, radio and internet printing the stories of individual’s privacy to gain the popularity
rather
than publishing the
current
situation like what is happening in the country and what difficulties citizens are facing. These kinds of practices should
be prohibited
.

To
begin
with, there are several reasons which impact ordinary
people
.
For example
, youngsters try to follow celebrities when they fascinated by their lifestyles and
also
pupils
make
hero and heroines to their role models which will lead them to on the
wrong
path.
Subsequently
, the press publishes the private matters of celebrities their new boyfriends, girlfriend’s
only
for the sake of fame
but
ordinary
people
try to follow their lifestyle in real life and
think
that marriages are not that much
important
as
before
so
they lose trust in
love
and marriage.
Moreover
,
teenagers
try to attempt such kinds of stunts, in reality, whatever they
watch
on television they favorite hero/heroines doing, the result of this, they
meet
with a serious accident.

Additionally
,
people
are not aware about the issue like lack of education, sex ratio, corruption, the main cause behind this is fake and the worst
media
which
only
shows
the stars and politicians on various sources;
hence
, no one came forward to solve this issue in the nation.
Furthermore
,
media
have to
focus on
important
matters
only
rather
than publishing anyone’s affair
publicly
.

To conclude
everything, publishing
different
news and articles about denizen’s privacy through various
media
platforms should be
stopped
. It is my earnest request to the
government
that these practices should
be banned
permanently
and
make
some
obligations to handle this situation.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, lots of media, including newspapers, magazines, television, radio, and even the internet, are publishing stories of people’s private lives. Should this practice be banned?

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