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Nowadays It is suggested that studying is the most important part of person’s life.

Nowadays It is suggested that studying is the most important part of person’s life. pRGyD
To study well and work hard this means the guarantee for future development. Everyone developes step by step, starting from the nursery schools. Education needs to be increased during the all period, needs to be experienced. To my mind, all of us have own aim for which we should fight and work. We want that our wishes become true. So, for good conditions of life it is important to have the suitable education. Success and fame come after hard work. The person who has a great knowledge is always respected. Today there is the period when the life becomes much stronger and harder. The need of education and hard work becomes the style of life. University education plays a great part in this. Future belongs to those, who struggles for the aim
To study well and
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work
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this means the guarantee for future development. Everyone
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developes
step by step, starting from the nursery schools.
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Education
needs to
be increased
during the all period, needs to
be experienced
. To my mind, all of us have
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own
aim for which we should fight and
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work
. We want that our wishes become true.
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So
, for
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good
conditions of life it is
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important
to have the suitable
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education
. Success and fame
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come
after
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hard
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work
. The person who has
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a great knowledge
is always respected.
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Today
there is the period when the life becomes much stronger and harder. The need of
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education
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
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work
becomes the style of life. University
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education
plays a great part in this. Future belongs to those, who struggles for the
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aim

IELTS essay Nowadays It is suggested that studying is the most important part of person’s life.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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