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In todays era,TVhas become very important part of life a amedium to spread intillegence and social awareness.Doyo think it could have other side as well

In todays era, TVhas become very important part of life a amedium to spread intillegence and social awareness. Doyo think it could have other side as well 153Kq
In recent years telvision is the prominent channel that creating knowledge and en rolling the intillegence in the society. while it is always debatable and clontraversial. In our country the. literacy rate is low, in the light of fact tv doesnt need any education to understand. Perhaps it became afirst media in the entairtainment, and exploring the news in every part of the world. Explicily it is affordable to he loweconomic status of the man. people are preffering watching telvisions rather than news paper and magzines. before inventedtelsion the visual communicatons plays pretty role. mostly children are fascinated about the comic stories and adults likely to watch about news and other broad castings. in contrary telvision telecasting some anti socail elements which are provoking the youth to do. The mal pracrtices in the tv serials are impacting the people consequently harm to the society. inorder to telecast crime stories tt can promote the intellectual programmes by conducting quiz shows. For example; KOUN BENAEGA CORDPATHY. Thus it encourages the people financially and it helpint o acquire knowledge. i conclude this v isuthe best explorer and there are some aspects should. control by the Government. it has to take relevent measures on the telecasting anti social activities. its every individual responsibility to follow the guidelines.
In recent years
telvision
is the prominent channel that creating knowledge and en rolling the
intillegence
in the society.
while
it is always debatable and
clontraversial
. In our country
the.
literacy
rate is low, in the light of fact
tv
doesnt
need any education to understand. Perhaps it became
afirst
media in the
entairtainment
, and exploring the news in every part of the world.
Explicily
it is affordable to he
loweconomic
status of the
man
.
people
are
preffering
watching
telvisions
rather
than
news paper
and
magzines
.
before
inventedtelsion
the visual
communicatons
plays pretty role.
mostly
children
are fascinated
about the comic stories and adults likely to
watch
about news and other broad castings.
in
contrary
telvision
telecasting
some
anti
socail
elements which are provoking the youth to do. The
mal
pracrtices
in the
tv
serials are impacting the
people
consequently
harm to the society.
inorder
to telecast crime stories
tt
can promote the intellectual
programmes
by conducting quiz
shows
.
For example
;
KOUN
BENAEGA
CORDPATHY
.
Thus
it encourages the
people
financially
and it
helpint
o acquire knowledge.
i
conclude this v
isuthe best
explorer and there are
some
aspects should.
control
by the
Government
.
it
has to
take
relevent
measures on the telecasting
anti social
activities.
its
every individual responsibility to follow the guidelines.
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IELTS essay In todays era, TVhas become very important part of life a amedium to spread intillegence and social awareness. Doyo think it could have other side as well

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