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Let’s start with the fact that for a person, family is everything. From the moment of birth until the last minute of death, the family is part of man. However, the family has many positives as well as many negatives. When you work with family members, everyone has a different attitude towards the issue. Parents take the case more seriously. But there are often moments of compromise as well. Because parents always make concessions that are sometimes not even necessary. And as for the siblings. They often take the case lightly, They often spoil everything unless of course they are small. Or even trying to win or do something better than you, which they do mostly illegally, and it is not so acceptable. They know your strengths / weaknesses, and they take advantage of them. However, all this has a good side. As you work with your family, you become more involved and learn a lot of new things. You about the family. You share the work, and it is more or less easy, and it ends easily. They say one brain is good, but two are better. It can be said that it is about that. You share unknown or interesting facts and laugh and learn a lot.
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is everything. From the moment of birth until the last minute of death, the
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is part of
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.
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negatives.

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members, everyone has a
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attitude towards the issue. Parents take the case more
seriously
.
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there are
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moments of compromise
as well
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concessions that are
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not even necessary. And as for the siblings. They
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take the case
lightly
, They
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spoil everything unless
of course
they are
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small
. Or even trying to win or do something better than you, which they do
mostly
illegally
, and it is not
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acceptable. They know your strengths / weaknesses, and they take advantage of them.

However
, all this has a
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good
side. As you work with your
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family
, you become more involved and learn
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a lot of
new things. You about the
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family
. You share the work, and it is more or less easy, and it ends
easily
. They say one brain is
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good
,
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two are better. It can
be said
that it is about that. You share unknown or interesting facts and laugh and learn a lot.
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IELTS essay advantages and problems working with family members

Essay
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