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NOWADAYS IT IS NOT ONLY THE LARGE COMPANIES ARE ABLE TO MAKE FILMS AS DIGITAL TECHNOLOGY ENABLES ANYONE TO PRODUCE FILMS.

NOWADAYS IT IS NOT ONLY THE LARGE COMPANIES ARE ABLE TO MAKE FILMS AS DIGITAL TECHNOLOGY ENABLES ANYONE TO PRODUCE FILMS. Prngw
n this cutting-edge era, technology has revolutionised the world with certain gadgets and appliances also entertainment has not left under these privileges with the efforts of many inventors, which make it possible for everyone to do filiming or video making. I totally support the above development as it empowers the passion and assist to make money. This essay will articulate positive points in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, the predominant reason behind the benefits of digital technology filming is that everyone can follow their passion and can experience different things. For epitome, studies have shown that 70% of TikTok users and other video making lovers are immensely satisfied with the features of these applications, to explicate, as in Canada, nowadays, many people use to make videos with these sites and getting love from all over the world and becoming globalised with this technological improvement in film making. In past days only rich persons or producers can make a video that garnered love from the public, but this work has not only to help people to make films but also assist them to get in touch with society like other celebrities without the use of too much money or any kind of assistance of an affluent person. Furthermore, considering further viewpoint in favour of aforementioned paragraph, as people are earning through this medium with the help of many digital application of screening. For example, recent research conducted in India's different media universities found that many stars of modern technology time are gotten hired by many producers of large companies for a role in their films; therefore directly or indirectly they are becoming renowned and capable to make their expenses. Thus, these are the advantages are taken only with the possibility of high pace inventions in various sections. To recapitulate, even though filming is creating some trouble for youngsters for their studies or in their other areas of development, its productive outcomes extremely outweigh the drawbacks.
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this cutting-edge era, technology has
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revolutionised
the world with certain gadgets and appliances
also
entertainment has not
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left
under these privileges with the efforts of
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many
inventors, which
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make
it possible for everyone to do
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filiming
or
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video
making. I
totally
support the above development as it empowers the passion and assist to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
money. This essay will articulate
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positive
points in the forthcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, the predominant reason behind the benefits of digital technology filming is that everyone can follow their passion and can experience
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
things. For epitome, studies have shown that 70% of TikTok users and other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
video
making lovers are
immensely
satisfied with the features of these applications, to explicate, as in Canada, nowadays,
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
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use to
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make
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videos
with these sites and getting
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love
from all over the world and becoming
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globalised
with this technological improvement in film making. In past days
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only
rich persons or producers can
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make
a
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video
that garnered
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love
from the public,
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but
this work has not
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only
to
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help
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people
to
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make
films
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but
also
assist them to
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get
in touch with society like other celebrities without the
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use
of too much money or any kind of assistance of an affluent person.

Furthermore
, considering
further
viewpoint in
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favour
of aforementioned paragraph, as
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people
are earning through this medium with the
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help
of
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many
digital application of screening.
For example
, recent research conducted in India's
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
media universities found that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
stars of modern technology time
are gotten
hired by
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many
producers of large
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companies
for a role in their films;
therefore
directly
or
indirectly
they are becoming renowned and capable to
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make
their expenses.
Thus
, these are the advantages
are taken
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only
with the possibility of high pace inventions in various sections.

To recapitulate,
even though
filming is creating
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some
trouble for youngsters for their studies or in their other areas of development, its productive outcomes
extremely
outweigh the drawbacks.
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IELTS essay NOWADAYS IT IS NOT ONLY THE LARGE COMPANIES ARE ABLE TO MAKE FILMS AS DIGITAL TECHNOLOGY ENABLES ANYONE TO PRODUCE FILMS.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
325 words
6.0
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