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Advantages of Neighborhood

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Numerous people desire to live in the city because they like shining lamp at night, walking with her or his family, go to shopping and others. However, I would like and love to live in the country. Moreover there are air-fresh, spotless street, a lot of exquisite flowers, diffirent types of trees, fresh fruits and vegetables in the town. So I am living exsatic with my family. Also I have got a lot of neigborhoods in my near house. They are being good for us. Because they assist every situation and also we have free time that I are talking and enjoying with them. As a result hometown is good at living, air the atmosphere and of course neighborhood is good for people.
Numerous
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people
desire to
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live
in the city
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because
they like shining lamp at night, walking with her or his family, go to shopping
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and others
.
However
, I would like and
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love
to
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live
in the country.
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Moreover
there are air-fresh, spotless
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street
,
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a lot of
exquisite flowers,
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diffirent
types of trees, fresh fruits and vegetables in the town.
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So
I am living
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exsatic
with my family.
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Also
I have
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got
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a lot of
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neigborhoods
in my near
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house
. They are being
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good
for us.
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Because
they assist every situation and
also
we have free time that I are talking and enjoying with them.
As a result
hometown is
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good
at living, air the atmosphere and
of course
neighborhood is
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good
for
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people
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IELTS essay Advantages of Neighborhood

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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