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Advantages of Neighborhood

Advantages of Neighborhood BMQMj

Numerous people desire to live in the city because they like shining lamp at night, walking with her or his family, go to shopping and others. However, I would like and love to live in the country. Moreover there are air-fresh, spotless street, a lot of exquisite flowers, diffirent types of trees, fresh fruits and vegetables in the town. So I am living exsatic with my family. Also I have got a lot of neigborhoods in my near house. They are being good for us. Because they assist every situation and also we have free time that I are talking and enjoying with them. As a result hometown is good at living, air the atmosphere and of course neighborhood is good for people.

Numerous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 desire to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they like shining lamp at night, walking with her or his family, go to shopping This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
. However
, I would like and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the country. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 there are air-fresh, spotless Possible agreement error. Did you mean "streets"?streets
street
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 exquisite flowers, Possible spelling mistake found.differentdiffident
diffirent
 types of trees, fresh fruits and vegetables in the town. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I am living Possible spelling mistake found.exoticelasticerraticecstatic
exsatic
 with my family. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
Possible spelling mistake found.neighborhoods
neigborhoods
 in my near This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. They are being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for us. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 they assist every situation and also
 we have free time that I are talking and enjoying with them. As a result
 hometown is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 at living, air the atmosphere and of course
 neighborhood is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. 