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Nowadays it is not only large company that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? v.1

Nowadays it is not only large company that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? v. 1
It is true that the impact of digital technology has its pros and cons, but the positive impact on film industry cannot be ignored. We are witnessing that many large companies can no longer hold a monopoly of making film like they used to be. This trend has opened a new era: A Digital Era when everyone is capable of making films. In my opinion, this development could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure. On the one hand, everyone has the ability to produce film would be seen as positive for two main reasons. Firstly, this new trend will make the film industry raise to a higher level. The more films are made, the more competition between filmmakers are created, hence the development of movies increases in both quantity and quality. Secondly, the continued advance in digital technology allows the small or independent filmmakers to have a new position in the current film industry film industry. The wide application of computers plays an important role in saving production cost. In fact, digital cameras have become cheaper and more accessible compared to the ones in the past. By using new digital cameras, the image resolution has been increased completely which the result is sharper and clearer pictures. On the other hand, whether or not films are made with lower cost are seriously good ones has been a matter of debate. A film is considered to be good owing to many elements. Therefore, the viewers have doubted that if a producer had been reliant on taking advantages of digital technology, his or her movie would be successful as expected. In conclusion, digital technology has a deep influence in changing how we make films, the issues about its quality should be concerned.
It is true that the impact of digital
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technology
has its pros and cons,
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but
the
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positive
impact on film
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industry
cannot be
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ignored
. We are witnessing that
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many
large
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companies
can no longer hold a monopoly of making film like they
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used
to be. This trend has opened a
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new
era: A Digital Era when everyone is capable of making films. In my opinion, this development could have both
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positive
and
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negative
consequences in equal measure.

On the one hand, everyone has the ability to produce film would be
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seen
as
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positive
for two main reasons.
Firstly
, this
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new
trend will
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make
the film
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industry
raise to a higher level. The more films
are made
, the more competition between filmmakers
are created
,
hence
the development of movies increases in both quantity and quality.

Secondly
, the continued advance in digital
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technology
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allows
the
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small
or independent filmmakers to have a
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new
position in the
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current
film
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industry
film
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industry
. The wide application of computers plays an
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important
role in saving production cost. In fact, digital cameras have become cheaper and more accessible compared to the
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ones
in the past. By using
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new
digital cameras, the image resolution has
been increased
completely which the result is sharper and clearer pictures.

On the other hand
,
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whether or not
films
are made
with lower cost are
seriously
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good
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ones
has been a matter of debate. A film
is considered
to be
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good
owing to
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many
elements.
Therefore
, the viewers have doubted that if a producer had been reliant on taking advantages of digital
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technology
,
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his or her
movie would be successful as
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expected
.

In conclusion
, digital
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technology
has a deep influence in changing how we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
films, the issues about its quality should
be concerned
.
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14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays it is not only large company that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? v. 1

Essay
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5 paragraphs
292 words
6.5
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