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Nowadays in some countries children are given fewer responsibilities compared to the past. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays in some countries children are given fewer responsibilities compared to the past. Lw8bp

In our generation children have more free time for themselves than past time. I can support this peoples’ idea, as well as will give some examples for it. We all know that every country experienced two world wars except other national wars. During hardly times like these every children could be become faster adult. They had to help to their mothers, took care for siblings, and worked almost 18 hours per day. They did not have even desire to another thing like playing in a yard with friends. Moreover, they did not have a health environment to be given best education. On other hand, in foretime technology was not developing as nowadays. They could not sit without working. They worked from morning till evening. They wanted to do every new thing, which they had not known before. However, they used to play with their friends, created new games outside. Their childhood was more interesting than ours. Turning back current time, we have all types of modern hi-techs, which can be steal the whole time of children. Also, parent of twenty first century wants to give more knowledge of different sides to their children. Thus and so, children’s time full of lessons of learning centers or trains of sport clubs. In conclusion, in our time every child can choose own way that how spend time, with whom spend or how continue their acting of social life.

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times
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children
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desire
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given best
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On other hand, in Possible spelling mistake found.fore time
foretime
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before
. However
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to play with their friends, created new games outside. Their childhood was more interesting than ours.

Turning back This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
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time
, we have all types of modern hi-techs, which can be Consider using a past participle here: "stolen".stolen
steal
 the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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so
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children’s
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 full of lessons of learning centers or trains of sport clubs.

In conclusion
, in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 every child can choose This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 way that how spend You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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, with whom spend or how continue their acting of social life. 