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Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than building new roads. Does the advantage outweigh the disadvantage? Give reason to your answer and include a relevant example from your know experience.

Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than building new roads. Does the advantage outweigh the disadvantage? Give reason to your answer and include a relevant example from your know experience. W5AK5
In today's life, transportation has become a key factor for one's day to day life. The governments are investing more in public transport instead of constructing roads. In my point of view, the merits of investing in public transport exceed the demerits. It is a good thing that the authorities are investing in buses and metros, this has increased the revenue of the nation. In addition, the cost of travelling is cheap compared to other means like personal transit such as cars, bikes etc. Furthermore, the area of connectivity is good, so that people can go anywhere anytime. For instance, in India, a newly launched train known as ' Bharat express' can cover 180 km distance in an hour which is impossible by one's vehicle and with the connectivity of road. Moreover, the advancement has also resulted in a decrease in traffic as well as pollution. However, most people say that the administrations are not prioritising the construction of roads. It is true that in most countries there are lots of scrap highways with various cracks in them which leads to the complication while travelling. One of the examples, in my country there are many places where roads have lots of potholes and poorly made which make it difficult for people to travel especially on rainy days. In conclusion, I want to say that the government should pay attention to road construction but one can not ignore the fact that investing in public transport have more advantage.
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more in public transport
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of constructing
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. In my point of view, the merits of
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investing
in public transport exceed the demerits.

It is a
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good
thing that the authorities are
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investing
in buses and metros, this has increased the revenue of the nation.
In addition
, the cost of travelling is
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cheap
compared to other means like personal transit such as cars, bikes etc.
Furthermore
, the area of connectivity is
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good
,
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that
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people
can go anywhere anytime.
For instance
, in India, a
newly
launched train known as
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'
Bharat express' can cover 180 km distance in an hour which is impossible by one's vehicle and with the connectivity of
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road
.
Moreover
, the advancement has
also
resulted in a decrease in traffic
as well
as pollution.

However
, most
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people
say that the administrations are not
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prioritising
the construction of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
. It is true that in most countries there are lots of scrap highways with various cracks in them which leads to the complication while travelling. One of the examples, in my country there are
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many
places where
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roads
have lots of potholes and
poorly
made which
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make
it difficult for
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people
to travel
especially
on rainy days.

In conclusion
, I want to say that the
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government
should pay attention to
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road
construction
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but
one can not
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ignore
the fact that
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investing
in public transport have more advantage.
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IELTS essay Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than building new roads. Does the advantage outweigh the disadvantage? Give reason to your answer and include a relevant example from your know experience.

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