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Describe memorable period

Describe memorable period 5A0mB
Well, I think I get good mental health because I have the greatest childhood. There are many several memories of when I was children. However, to begin with, I just pop up to mind my is the first time I went to school in six-year-old. Of course, I can’t remember that specific story, and I was told by my Mom. The story seems quite embarrassed, but I thought it help me realize some things. Now on the subject of, what happened during this event. Alright, I could say that I have a day I can’t be slipped my mind. I cried on during from my home to school, and it can't stop If I didn’t saw my parents outside. Consequently, my parents still stayed until I finished the end of my class.
Well, I
think
I
get
good
mental health
because
I have the greatest childhood. There are
many
several memories of when I was children.
However
, to
begin
with, I
just
pop up to mind my is the
first
time I went to school in six-year-
old
.
Of course
, I can’t remember that specific story, and I was
told
by my Mom. The story seems quite embarrassed,
but
I
thought
it
help
me realize
some
things.

Now
on the subject of, what happened during this
event
. Alright, I could say that I have a day I can’t
be slipped
my mind. I cried on during from my home to school, and it can't
stop
If I didn’t
saw
my parents outside.
Consequently
, my parents
still
stayed until I finished the
end
of my
class
.
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IELTS essay Describe memorable period

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
132 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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