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Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than building new roads.  Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than building new roads. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Pgm8g
In today’s world transportation plays a crucial role in day to day life of humans. Development of public transport like trains and buses are additionally financed by the governments. However, there is a decline in road standards. I will be discussing which factor has more significance. Firstly, investing in public transport will generate revenue for the government which obviously be beneficial for the country’s economy. It is a cost-effective mean of transport which people can easily afford for their daily usage. For example, in India ‘Vande Bharat’ an express electric train was launched which can travel a longer distance in short time which is not possible using a personal vehicle. Secondly, using these means of transport is advantageous to environment as they are able to accommodate more people at once causing less pollution compared to many private vehicles. This view has its own demerits as Authorities are giving lesser preference to road development. Without the advancement of roads, it quite difficult to drive on such fragmented roadway. Even the passengers travelling in a bus or going to catch a train will experience discomfort on a tremendous road. While, on high altitude region train services are still not serviceable, and the foremost way that connects us to that area is road transport. To conclude, due to the reasons mentioned above in the essay, it is important for the government to maintain a balance in between development of roads and public transport. In my view, advantages of this outlook outweigh the disadvantages.
In
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today
’s world transportation plays a crucial role in day to day life of

humans. Development of public
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transport
like trains and buses are

additionally
financed by the
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governments
.
However
, there is a decline in

road standards. I will be discussing which factor has more significance.

Firstly
, investing in public
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transport
will generate revenue for the

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government
which
obviously
be beneficial for the country’s economy. It is a

cost-effective mean of
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transport
which
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people
can
easily
afford for their

daily usage.
For example
, in India ‘
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Vande
Bharat’ an express electric train

was launched
which can travel a longer distance in short time which is not

possible using a personal vehicle.
Secondly
, using these means of

transport is advantageous to environment as they are able to

accommodate more
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people
at once causing less pollution compared to

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many
private vehicles.

This view has its
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own
demerits as Authorities are giving lesser preference

to
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road
development. Without the advancement of
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roads
,
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it
quite difficult to

drive on such fragmented roadway. Even the passengers travelling in a bus

or going to catch a train will experience discomfort on a tremendous road.

While, on high altitude region train services are
still
not serviceable, and the

foremost way that connects us to that area is
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road
transport.

To conclude
, due to the reasons mentioned above in the essay, it is

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important
for the
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government
to maintain a balance in between

development of
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roads
and public
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transport
. In my view, advantages of this

outlook outweigh the disadvantages.
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IELTS essay Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than building new roads. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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