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Nowadays, government is spending the money too for learning planets and developing space equipments, most scientists think that it is true, society, however, believe that is unprofitable and this means should be spent for education , helping organisation and I agree it.

Nowadays, government is spending the money too for learning planets and developing space equipments, most scientists think that it is true, society, however, believe that is unprofitable and this means should be spent for education, helping organisation and I agree it. M3wBe
On the one hand, most countries, which are development places, take into consideration researching and investigating space. For example, In the past, the main motivation for a nation to have its own space agency has always been the desire to design power and prestige. Before the Soviet Union, the U. S. spent $ 288 billion over 13 years to land people on the moon. After winning the competition and consolidating the status of the world’s first space institute, then they changed the goals which are extremely difficult and stupid that is making or discovering new planets for living and as the result, most money spent wastefully. On the other hand, people believe that we should expend the most money which is used for space equipments to build schools or hospital, help people who are the old and disabled. It is said that this controlling of governments change in future. People assume that countries develop the condition of the population, air and other pollution and the economic problems of the state will be solved. In conclusion, I think the money spent by government to space tools that air condition is damaged by rockets which is flight to other planets. We should not spend money too for space.
On the one hand, most countries, which are development places, take into consideration researching and investigating
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own
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agency has always been the desire to design power and prestige.
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the Soviet Union, the U. S. spent
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$ 288
billion over 13 years to land
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on the moon. After winning the competition and consolidating the status of the world’s
first
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space
institute, then they
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changed
the goals which are
extremely
difficult and stupid
that is
making or discovering new planets for living and as the result, most
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money
spent
wastefully
.

On the other hand
,
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people
believe that we should expend the most
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money
which is
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for
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equipments to build schools or hospital,
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people
who are the
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old
and disabled. It
is said
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governments
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change
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in future
.
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People
assume that countries develop the condition of the population, air and other pollution and the economic problems of the state will
be solved
.

In conclusion
, I
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the
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spent by
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government
to
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space
tools that air condition
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by rockets which is flight to other planets. We should not spend
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too for
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IELTS essay Nowadays, government is spending the money too for learning planets and developing space equipments, most scientists think that it is true, society, however, believe that is unprofitable and this means should be spent for education, helping organisation and I agree it.

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