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Decision you made and feel regretful

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When I got admitted to the higher secondary class, I took a subject - Statistics. In fact, it was one of the wrong decisions of my life. I took the subject like a fool without being aware of the course details. Thank you for the question and it reminds me how stupid I was in my college days. I will describe the event now. In my college days, I got a chance to take an additional subject that will help to increase my overall score. In fact, the subject aimed to hike the CGPA of the students. So, most of the students took the subject as per their will. In line with them, I also took a subject and later found that it was one of the complicated one. I had to take the decision as it was a must for every student to choose the subject. There were no alternatives. But I made a wrong decision by picking the subject – Statistics. It took a short time to realise the mistake. I was actually amazed by the name of the subject. The name and its spelling charmed me too much. So, I was in love with the subject. After the admission, the classes were held. On the first day of Statistics class, I came to know that it was related to numerous mathematical issues. I was afraid of mathematics and wanted to get rid of it in my college days. Suddenly I realised that it was not for me. And I made a wrong decision in my life. Luckily, I was able to change the subject and took computer science instead. I cannot imagine the situations anymore. If I continued with the subject, surely I had to fail in the course only for the mathematical issues alone. Besides, there were some other theories that I failed to understand too. So, finally, I gave up the subject. It was a wrong decision for many reasons. Generally, people prefer to read books which they like most. During the academic activities, they are attracted to the subjects which they get interested in. The scenario was similar to me. Initially, I took the subject without knowing anything about it. Later I realised that it was the wrong decision for me. I had no interest in solving the mathematical terms and equations. In a word, I lost interest in it. So, if I continued the subject, I would not have a very good score and the poor grades might have influenced my overall CGPA. So, the idea of taking Statistics appeared wrong to me. In fact, it was not possible to go with the things that I do not like. The subject was the same for me. I have altered the decision and it was only my luck that allowed me to do so. After a few days of the class, there was a notice from the college authority about changing such subjects. Many of the students have changed the subjects at that time. This is the generosity of the school authority that it allows the students to change such subjects. I was also happy by altering the subject and scored a remarkable score on the final exam. It is a remarkable event of my life. Thought the past, I have made many wrong decisions and I do not blame myself for the mistakes. They were my learning and now I do not have such mistakes. I know how to take the right decision.
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. In fact, it was one of the
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wrong
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decisions
of my life. I
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took
the
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like a fool without being aware of the course
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details
. Thank you for the question and it reminds me how stupid I was in my college days. I will
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describe
the
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got
a chance to take an additional
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subject
that will
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help
to increase my
overall
score. In fact, the
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subject
aimed to hike the CGPA of the
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students
.
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So
, most of the
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the
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subject
as per their will. In line with them, I
also
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took
a
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subject
and later found that it was one of the complicated one. I had to take the
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decision
as it was a
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must
for every
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student
to choose the
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. There were no alternatives.
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But
I made a
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wrong
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decision
by picking the
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subject
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–
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Statistics
. It
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a short time to
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realise
the mistake. I was actually amazed by the name of the
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subject
. The name and its spelling charmed me too much.
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So
, I was in
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love
with the
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. After the admission, the
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classes
were held
. On the
first
day of
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Statistics
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class
, I came to know that it
was related
to numerous mathematical issues. I was afraid of mathematics and wanted to
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get
rid of it in my college days.
Suddenly
I
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realised
that it was not for me. And I made a
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wrong
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decision
in my life. Luckily, I was able to
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change
the
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subject
and
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took
computer science
instead
. I cannot imagine the situations anymore. If I continued with the
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subject
,
surely
I had to fail in the course
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only
for the mathematical issues alone.
Besides
, there were
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some
other theories that I failed to understand too.
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So
,
finally
, I gave up the
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subject
. It was a
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wrong
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decision
for
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many
reasons.
Generally
,
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people
prefer to read books which they like most. During the academic activities, they
are attracted
to the
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subjects
which they
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get
interested in. The scenario was similar to me.
Initially
, I
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took
the
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subject
without knowing anything about it. Later I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
that it was the
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wrong
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decision
for me. I had no interest in solving the mathematical terms and equations. In a word, I lost interest in it.
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So
, if I continued the
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subject
, I would not have a
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very
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good
score and the poor grades might have influenced my
overall
CGPA.
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So
, the
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idea
of taking
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Statistics
appeared
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wrong
to me. In fact, it was not possible to
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go with
the things that I do not like. The
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subject
was the same for me. I have altered the
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decision
and it was
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only
my luck that
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me to do
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so
. After a few days of the
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class
, there was a notice from the college authority about changing such
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subjects
.
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Many
of the
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students
have
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changed
the
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subjects
at that time. This is the generosity of the school authority that it
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allows
the
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students
to
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change
such
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subjects
. I was
also
happy by altering the
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subject
and scored a remarkable score on the final exam. It is a remarkable
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event
of my life.
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the past, I have made
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many
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wrong
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decisions
and I do not blame myself for the mistakes. They were my learning and
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now
I do not have such mistakes. I know how to take the right
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decision
.
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IELTS essay Decision you made and feel regretful

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
580 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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