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Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved theway people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.4

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved theway people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 4
In recent years, studying overseas has become a popular decision among a growing number of students. This trend provides undeniable benefits to students as well as the countries they are deciding to travel to. However, there are some drawbacks. Deciding to study abroad can be challenging yet the rewards are great. Students can gain valuable experiences when they travel to foreign countries and therefore broaden their horizons. For instance, students who decide to study in their local universities will never have the privilege of learning a foreign language, getting to know other cultures, or becoming independent. Furthermore, a lot of overseas universities offer unique and high-quality education which can greatly enhance the academic progress of students, thus, enabling them to transfer this knowledge to their own countries. Regarding countries, they can greatly benefit from international students as they will improve the economy and contribute to the diversity of societies. Moreover, foreign universities profit enormously from the tuition fees paid by international students. Despite the aforementioned advantages, studying abroad can have a detrimental effect on the home countries of students. As the number of adolescents in these countries shrink, the economy might be threatened. There won’t be enough people to work part-time or study in local universities, which may cause some universities to close and some cities to be abandoned. Additionally, studying abroad is expensive which means that large sums of money are being transferred to foreign countries instead of being spent locally. In conclusion, the growing trend of young people leaving their home countries and travelling abroad to study has many benefits such as enhancing the experience and the knowledge of adolescents. Yet this development leads to disadvantages to their home countries such as the possibility of local universities closing and the negative effects on the local economy.
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students
. This trend provides undeniable benefits to
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students
as well
as the
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countries
they are deciding to travel to.
However
, there are
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some
drawbacks.

Deciding to
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study
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abroad
can be challenging
yet
the rewards are great.
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Students
can gain valuable experiences when they travel to
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foreign
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countries
and
therefore
broaden their horizons.
For instance
,
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students
who decide to
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study
in their
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local
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universities
will never have the privilege of learning a
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foreign
language, getting to know other cultures, or becoming independent.
Furthermore
,
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a lot of
overseas
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universities
offer unique and high-quality education which can
greatly
enhance the academic progress of
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students
,
thus
, enabling them to transfer this knowledge to their
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own
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countries
. Regarding
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countries
, they can
greatly
benefit from international
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students
as they will
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improve
the economy and contribute to the diversity of societies.
Moreover
,
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foreign
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universities
profit
enormously
from the tuition fees paid by international students.

Despite the aforementioned advantages, studying
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abroad
can have a detrimental effect on the home
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countries
of
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students
. As the number of adolescents in these
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countries
shrink, the economy might
be threatened
. There won’t be
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enough
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people
to work part-time or
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study
in
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local
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universities
, which may cause
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some
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universities
to close and
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some
cities to
be abandoned
.
Additionally
, studying
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abroad
is expensive which means that large sums of money are
being transferred
to
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foreign
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countries
instead
of
being spent
locally
.

In conclusion
, the growing trend of young
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people
leaving their home
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countries
and travelling
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abroad
to
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study
has
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many
benefits such as enhancing the experience and the knowledge of adolescents.
Yet
this development leads to disadvantages to their home
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countries
such as the possibility of
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local
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universities
closing and the
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negative
effects on the
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local
economy.
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He who knows no foreign languages knows nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS essay Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved theway people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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