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nowadays fast food is becoming cheaper and widely available do the diasd outweigh adv

nowadays fast food is becoming cheaper and widely available do the diasd outweigh adv ArpBX
These days, junk food is becoming more easily available in less price in many of the countries. It has more disadvantages than its benefits. This essay will cover advantages along with disadvantages in the following paragraphs. To begin with, fast food is common among almost all the countries these days for example in India where all variety of fast food is available in almost all the price range. Due to this, street food available in cheap price results in more and more people becoming addict to it but it is not nutritious for our health no doubt it is tasty when we eat but it has a huge negative impact on people's health. Moving further, most of the restaurant and street vendors use cheap ingredients to make this food is highly injurious for one's health. One of its major reason is ordering food online as companies like Uber eats and Swiggy provide people with wide variety of food by sitting at home which not only has bad affects on the health of the people but they are also becoming lazy by sitting at home. To conclude with the above statement, eating these fast food some of the time is not injurious for one's health but eating it in daily routine have many bad affects on people's health so before eating these junk food items we should keep it in everyone's mind.
These days, junk
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is becoming more
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available in less price in
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many
of the countries. It has more disadvantages than its benefits. This essay will cover advantages along with disadvantages in the following paragraphs.

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with,
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fast
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food
is common among almost all the countries these days
for example
in India where all variety of
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fast
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food
is available in almost all the price range. Due to this, street
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food
available in
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cheap
price results in more and more
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people
becoming addict to it
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but
it is not nutritious for our
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health
no doubt it is tasty when we eat
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but
it has a huge
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negative
impact on
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people
's health.

Moving
further
, most of the restaurant and street vendors
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use
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cheap
ingredients to
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make
this
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food
is
highly
injurious for one's
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health
. One of its major reason is ordering
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food
online as
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companies
like Uber eats and
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Swiggy
provide
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people
with wide variety of
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food
by sitting at home which not
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only
has
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bad
affects on the
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health
of the
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people
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they are
also
becoming lazy by sitting at home.

To conclude
with the above statement, eating these
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fast
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food
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some of the
time is not injurious for one's
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health
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but
eating it in daily routine have
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many
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bad
affects on
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people
's
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health
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so
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before
eating these junk
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food
items we should
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keep
it in everyone's mind.
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IELTS essay nowadays fast food is becoming cheaper and widely available do the diasd outweigh adv

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
231 words
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