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The process shows how to produce olive oil

The process shows how to produce olive oil nEEj2

The process shows how to produce olive oil Overall, the comprises a plethora of steps, it starts with hand picking of olive and ending with the final products being transported to the contributor for sale. At the beginning of the process, fruit is harvested, after which they are transported to a factory where they are washing with low-temperature water. Subsequently, Olive is belted by another machine which olives separate the fruit from seed, after that it smashing and ground into a paste, and the olive stone is removed. The Olives continuous with putting in a bag with holes, which then is put into a pressing machine. In the next stage, it is placed into a separating process where water is secluded from oil. At the final process of olive oil product, it is packaged in the boxes and dispatch to store where it can be sold

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 how to produce olive oil

Overall
, the The word "comprises" is a verb. Did you mean the noun "compromises" (= consent)?compromises
comprises
 a plethora of steps, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.hand-pickinghandpicking
hand picking
 of olive and ending with the final products being transported
 to the contributor for sale.

At the beginning of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, fruit is harvested
, after which they are transported
 to a factory where they are washing with low-temperature water. Subsequently
, Olive is belted
 by another machine which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
 separate the fruit from seed, after that Did you mean "it's smashing", "it is smashing", or "it was smashing"?it's smashingit is smashingit was smashing
it smashing
 and ground into a paste, and the olive stone is removed
.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
Olives
 continuous with putting in a bag with holes, which then is put
 into a pressing machine. In the next
 stage, it is placed
 into a separating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 where water is secluded
 from oil. At the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 of olive oil product, it is packaged
 in the boxes and dispatch to store where it can be Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsold.sold!sold?sold:sold,sold;
sold