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Nowadays cultures around the world are becoming more and more similar, as compared to the past. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays cultures around the world are becoming more and more similar, as compared to the past. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development? BMV39
Of late, due to globalization, travelling these days from one country to another for studies, jobs, residency etc has tremendously increased. As people travel they learn the cultures of other countries and start following same. Hence, the cultures are becoming similar across the countries, which was not the case in past. In my opinion, it is a positive development. I shall expound my thoughts in detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Of late, due to globalization, travelling these days from one country to another for studies, jobs, residency etc has
tremendously
increased. As
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people
travel they learn the cultures of other countries and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
following same.
Hence
, the cultures are becoming similar across the countries, which was not the case
Did you mean: "in the past"?
in past
. In my opinion, it is a
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positive
development. I shall expound my thoughts in detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.

IELTS essay Nowadays cultures around the world are becoming more and more similar, as compared to the past. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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