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write an essay on your favorite day. why is it your favorite day and what do you do on that day

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My favorite day is Sunday because it's a holiday for me. On Sunday, I like to wake up a bit late and will have my breakfast with my parents and younger brother. Then I will play football with my father inside our house. Sometimes he helps me in doing some interesting activities. By this time, my mother will cook my favorite dishes for me which I enjoy a lot. After lunch I will take a short nap with my family after a story from my mother. In the evening, I will watch some movies or my favorite cartoon. Evening my father will take us to a park nearby or any beach. Sometimes we visit our nearby temple. I love to play with my brother in the park and beaches. We will go to the market and buy vegetables and other items. Sunday’s I will have my dinner on time and go to bed early so that I can go to school, next day on time. I will get more refreshed and energetic in my studies after each Sunday’s. Sunday will always be my favorite day.
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IELTS essay write an essay on your favorite day. why is it your favorite day and what do you do on that day

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