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Teamwork offers a lot of benefits in modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Teamwork offers a lot of benefits in modern society. NVk7b
Of late, teamwork is gaining a lot of significance. On a closer observation of the job postings by leading companies, we find that they require talented individuals who are also team players. Many people support this new norm. I also welcome this idea. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth the explanations in support of my opinion. Brainstorming is essential for the generation of new ideas. Scientists generally arrive at a conclusion after deep debates and conversations. The problem that had been very difficult to solve in isolation may become easier to solve with the assistance of others. People with a different perspective induce revolutionary thinking. Teamwork boosts the morale of an individual. Recent studies show that people were much happier to solve problems as a team. Also, collaboration fosters a learning spirit. It reduces the burden of work. Research has shown that herculean tasks are accomplished when two people work together rather than a competent individual working on it alone. A single person cannot have the entire prowess needed to complete a task. For example, person A may be having exceptional coding skills in area A but may lack expertise in area B. So, person A needs to be complemented by another person skilled in area B. In the process, person A acquires knowledge of area B and vice-versa. So teamwork helps in skill-building. They may start feeling more worthy of their competencies while they educate each other. Also, they may become courageous to explore new zones by the encouragement provided by their teammates. Properly managed teams can be remarkably productive, albeit the argument that teamwork might relax ownership on a task. In conclusion, teamwork promotes individual growth and achieves the goals of the organization. Under the right supervision, teams can accomplish tenfold more than what is expected out of them.
Of late,
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teamwork
is gaining
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a lot of
significance. On a closer observation of the job postings by leading
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companies
, we find that they require talented
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individuals
who are
also
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team
players.
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Many
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people
support this new norm. I
also
welcome this
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idea
. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth the explanations in support of my opinion.

Brainstorming is essential for the generation of new
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ideas
. Scientists
generally
arrive at a conclusion after deep debates and conversations. The problem that had been
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very
difficult to solve in isolation may become easier to solve with the assistance of others.
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People
with a
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different
perspective induce revolutionary thinking.
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Teamwork
boosts the morale of an
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individual
. Recent studies
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show
that
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people
were much happier to solve problems as a
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team
.
Also
, collaboration fosters a learning spirit. It
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reduces
the burden of work. Research has shown that
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herculean
tasks
are accomplished
when two
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people
work together
rather
than a competent
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individual
working on it alone.

A single
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person
cannot have the entire prowess needed to complete a task.
For example
,
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person
A may be having exceptional coding
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skills
in
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area
A
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but
may lack expertise in
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area
B.
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So
,
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person
A needs to
be complemented
by another
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person
skilled in
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area
B. In the process,
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person
A acquires knowledge of
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area
B and vice-versa.
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So
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teamwork
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helps
in
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skill
-building. They may
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start
feeling more worthy of their competencies while they educate each other.
Also
, they may become courageous to explore new zones by the encouragement provided by their teammates.

Properly
managed
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teams
can be
remarkably
productive, albeit the argument that
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teamwork
might relax ownership on a task.

In conclusion
,
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teamwork
promotes
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individual
growth and achieves the goals of the organization. Under the right supervision,
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teams
can accomplish tenfold more than what is
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expected
out of them.
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IELTS essay Teamwork offers a lot of benefits in modern society.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
303 words
6.5
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