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a marketing plan on social media for a particular brand

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We are from marketing team at dienmayxanh center. With 10 years of experiences, 1697 centers, 163 cities and provinces on whole country, we are usually given to you, our clients, the best services and the best interested experiment. Today our team is in responsibility to present the new marketing plan for this summer. For the beginning, I take a look our team’s members. We have 4 members: Tien Sang, Minh Nguyet, Quỳnh Nga and me, My Linh. Our presentation is included 4 parts: firstly, we have an overview about the brand that we are be in charge of promote, secondly we do a research for the target audience and make the marketing strategy, next we have the advantages of the product promoted and the last is its benefits. Firstly, I take the responsibility to introduce the brand chosen. This is Panasonic. Most people know that Panasonic is the big foreign company. But this is not just a company; Panasonic is also the name of the corporation from a major Japanese multinational electronics company. His headquarter is in Osaka, one of the megacity of Japan. This company was founded in 1918 and it was present in Vietnam since 1950s by the other name. In 1971, Panasonic marked its official presence in Vietnam and have the office in Hanoi. These familiar brands Panasonic, Sanyo, JVC are belonging to this corporation. Our presentation will focus on brand Panasonic. Its slogan is “A Better Life, A Better World”. As on its website, “Panasonic is committed to creating a better life and a better world, continuously contributing to the evolution of society and to the happiness of people around the globe”. Panasonic mark its business in various domain, we have appliances what include consumer electronics (such as TV, refrigerator, washing machine, etc. ), air-conditioner and related products, life solutions, mobile communications, automotive. After more than 100 years of establishment and development, Panasonic brand has proven its position in the electronics market with many impressive ratings. 5/50 most environmentally friendly brands in the world in 2014, sixth out of 30 best brands in Japan in 2015. By the way, it is probably that Panasonic is rapidly developing in others fields in the future. In this summer, we have an attractive promotion for the Panasonic air-conditioners. The group’s chief representative in Vietnam affirmed that the Vietnamese air-conditioner market would continue to grow strongly. In fact, Vietnam is currently ranked third place in terms of growth rate in this industry, after India and Indonesia. 17% of Vietnamese households use air conditioners. Because people’s income is increasing, the demand for enhance the life continue to increase. As the report in October 2019, Vietnam is one of the top three biggest air-conditioner market in South East Asia. Then, we take a look for this product. Panasonic is a knowing brand of the air conditioners and air solutions. When we talk about this field, we consider it includes 4 categories, such as civil conditioner, commercial air conditioner, air purifier and eco solutions. Our team brings the focus on civil conditioner because this seems popular and has a stable consumer market. As civil conditioner, we have cooling and heat pump. Consumers in the Northern and Southern regions also have different choices because the different climates. In the North, there is the winter, so some customers choose 2 way air-conditioners; it means with cooling and heating features, we call it “heat pump”. However, the winter in the North sometimes is not too harsh, people still have others solutions such as heater, so 2-way air conditioners only account for about 10% of sales. Panasonic air-conditioner normally is classified by 4 criteria. First criteria are the technology. This has the standard model non-inverter, or standard with inverter, or the newest technology Purification nanoe. Inverter technology helps us to save the energy, then we don’t spend too much for electricity costs when we use electronic products with inverter technology, included air-conditioner. Besides this technology, the new technology of Panasonic, nanoe technology, is started in 2001 can keep the air in your home clean and fresh 24/7. We can find the Panasonic machine by cooling capacity as your demand from 1HP to 2. 5 HP, it adapt respectively from 15 square meters to 40 square meters of the superficies. The next is its features. How does the cooling function work? What are the specified functions? Does it have the sleep mode? Last but not least, this is its prices. Panasonic air-conditioner always attract the consumer by its style, its newest technology, its modern functions, and go with all of these things, the price may be more higher than others brand at the same market segment. We will go into details with the next part present by Tien Sang. It’s your turn now.
We are from marketing
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team
at
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dienmayxanh
center. With 10 years of experiences, 1697 centers, 163 cities and provinces on whole country, we are
usually
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given
to you, our clients, the best services and the best interested experiment.
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Today
our
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team
is in responsibility to present the new marketing plan for this summer.

For the beginning, I take a look our
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team’s
members. We have 4 members:
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Tien
Sang,
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Minh
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Nguyet
,
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Quỳnh
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Nga
and me, My
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Linh
. Our presentation
is included
4 parts:
firstly
, we have an overview about the
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brand
that we are
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be
in charge of promote,
secondly
we do
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a research
for the target audience and
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make
the marketing strategy,
next
we have the advantages of the
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product
promoted and the last is its benefits.

Firstly
, I take the responsibility to introduce the
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brand
chosen. This is Panasonic. Most
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people
know that Panasonic is the
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big
foreign
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company
.
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But
this is not
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just
a
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company
; Panasonic is
also
the name of the corporation from a major Japanese multinational electronics
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company
. His headquarter is in Osaka, one of the
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megacity
of Japan. This
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company
was founded
in 1918 and it was present in Vietnam since 1950s by the
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other
name. In 1971, Panasonic marked its official presence in Vietnam and have the office in Hanoi. These familiar
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brands
Panasonic,
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Sanyo
,
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JVC
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are belonging
to this corporation.

Our presentation will focus on
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brand
Panasonic. Its slogan is “A
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Better
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Life
, A
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Better
World”. As on its website, “Panasonic
is committed
to creating a
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better
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life
and a
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better
world,
continuously
contributing to the evolution of society and to the happiness of
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people
around the globe”.
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Panasonic mark
its business in various domain, we have appliances what include
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consumer
electronics (such as TV, refrigerator, washing machine, etc.
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)
, air-conditioner and related
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products
,
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life
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solutions
, mobile communications, automotive. After more than 100 years of establishment and development, Panasonic
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brand
has proven its position in the electronics
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market
with
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many
impressive ratings. 5/50 most
environmentally
friendly
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brands
in the world in 2014, sixth out of 30 best
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brands
in Japan in 2015. By the way, it is
probably
that Panasonic is
rapidly
developing in others fields in the future.

In this summer, we have an attractive promotion for the Panasonic air-conditioners. The group’s chief representative in Vietnam affirmed that the Vietnamese air-conditioner
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market
would continue to grow
strongly
. In fact, Vietnam is
currently
ranked third place in terms of growth rate in this industry, after India and Indonesia. 17% of Vietnamese households
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use
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air
conditioners.
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Because
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people’s
income is increasing, the demand for enhance the
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life
continue to increase. As the report in October 2019, Vietnam is one of the top three biggest air-conditioner
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market
in South East Asia. Then, we take a look for this
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product
. Panasonic is a knowing
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brand
of the
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air
conditioners and
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air
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solutions
. When we talk about this field, we consider it includes 4 categories, such as civil conditioner, commercial
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air
conditioner,
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air
purifier and
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eco
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solutions
. Our
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team
brings the focus on civil conditioner
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because
this seems popular and has a stable
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consumer
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market
. As civil conditioner, we have
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cooling
and heat pump.
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Consumers
in the Northern and Southern regions
also
have
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different
choices
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because
the
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different
climates. In the North, there is the winter,
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so
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some
customers choose 2 way air-conditioners; it means with
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cooling
and heating features, we call it “heat pump”.
However
, the winter in the North
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sometimes is
not too harsh,
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people
still
have others
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solutions
such as heater,
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so
2-way
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air
conditioners
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only
account for about 10% of sales.

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Panasonic air-conditioner
normally
is classified
by 4 criteria.
First
criteria are the
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technology
. This has the standard model non-inverter, or standard with inverter, or the newest
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technology
Purification
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nanoe
. Inverter
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technology
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helps
us to save the energy, then we don’t spend too much for electricity costs when we
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use
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electronic
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products
with inverter
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technology
, included air-conditioner.
Besides
this
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technology
, the new
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technology
of Panasonic,
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nanoe
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technology
, is
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started
in 2001 can
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keep
the
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air
in your home clean and fresh 24/7.

We can find the Panasonic machine by
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cooling
capacity as your demand from 1HP to 2. 5 HP, it
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adapt
respectively
from 15 square meters to 40 square meters of the
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superficies
. The
next
is its features. How does the
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cooling
function work? What are the specified functions? Does it have the sleep mode? Last
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but
not least, this is its prices.
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Panasonic air-conditioner
always attract the
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consumer
by its style, its newest
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technology
, its modern functions, and
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go with
all of these things, the price may be
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more higher
than others
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brand
at the same
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market
segment.

We will go into
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details
with the
next
part present by
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Tien
Sang. It’s your turn
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now
.
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IELTS essay a marketing plan on social media for a particular brand

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
795 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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