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Some people find history fascinating subject other say that is ti dull

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Some people argue that history a interesting subject, while other say that it is boring along with very old aged subject which could not attraction of generations. I believe that despite some acceptable information, our education system is not need anymore. So I will introduce some relavant examples in this essey which history should be stay with us or no. First of all, scientics reckon, History should not be separate from our life. As, every time and day are moved to history. That is why, If you would not save history you will be disappear to young generarion and none could not know you. We can see a good examle in one country which called Chine. It has not history subject at the school at 20 years ago, so none know about history, culture and historical monuments. On the other hand, History has more and more information like as number, unnessary years wich they are diffucult to memorise, so not only me but also many students are dislike this subject. For instance, Last term in our university 80 percentage of people fail from exam despite good preperation. Are you realize history is how unprofitable. Another interesting fact wich I read in the magazine in 2 day ago. A number of parents vote to history seperated from school. Reason why, they think it is wastefull time to child in the modern peace, so I joint to them idea and recommend instead of history Education Govurment should improve scientic subejects, To sum up, although histroy has some benifits, we should avoid from this subject which has a long time to memorise unnessary date. and world are facing new technical and practical subjects which have very crusial knowledge in real situations, inventions.
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, while other say that it is boring along with
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aged
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which could not attraction of generations. I believe that despite
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acceptable information, our education system is not
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anymore.
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I will introduce
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examples in this
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which
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should be
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with us or no.

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,
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scientics
reckon,
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should not be separate from our life. As, every time and day are
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moved
to
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history
.
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why, If you would not save
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history
you will be
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to young
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generarion
and none could not know you. We can
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a
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in one country which called Chine. It has not
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history
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at the school at 20 years ago,
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none know about
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, culture and historical monuments.

On the other hand
,
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has more and more information like as number,
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unnessary
years
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wich
they are
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diffucult
to
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memorise
,
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not
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me
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also
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students are dislike this
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.
For instance
,

Last term in our university 80 percentage of
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people
fail from exam despite
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good
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preperation
. Are you realize
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history
is how unprofitable.

Another interesting fact
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wich
I read in the magazine in 2 day ago.

A number of parents vote to
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history
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seperated
from school. Reason why, they
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it is
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wastefull
time to child in the modern peace,
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I joint to them
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of
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history
Education
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should
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improve
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scientic
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,

To sum up, although
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histroy
has
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some
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benifits
, we should avoid from this
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which has a long time to
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memorise
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unnessary
date.
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and
world are facing new technical and practical
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subjects
which have
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crusial
knowledge in real situations, inventions.
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IELTS essay Some people find history fascinating subject other say that is ti dull

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
289 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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