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Nowadays, computers are useful for people but others think that it is not. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, computers are useful for people but others think that it is not. To what extant 8PdP

Technology is the most powerful key for the individuals to give them more opportunities in the life. However, l agree that computers should drive the cars instead of humans for two main areas. ‌Firstly, in this period there are many type of technologies that they could get the great position in the future. In case that humans should have money and could buy the computers, yet they will not know; use it for that they ought to watch the social medias for using the computers; however.

Technology is the most powerful key for the individuals to give them more opportunities in the life. However
, l This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that computers should drive the cars instead
 of humans for two main areas. ‌Firstly
, in this period there are Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: "many types".many types
many type
 of technologies that they could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the great position in the future. In case that humans should have money and could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the computers, yet
 they will not know; This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it for that they ought to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the social medias for using the computers; however
. 

IELTS essay Nowadays, computers are useful for people but others think that it is not. To what extant

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