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Nowadays, computers are useful for people but others think that it is not. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, computers are useful for people but others think that it is not. To what extant 8PdP
Technology is the most powerful key for the individuals to give them more opportunities in the life. However, l agree that computers should drive the cars instead of humans for two main areas. ‌Firstly, in this period there are many type of technologies that they could get the great position in the future. In case that humans should have money and could buy the computers, yet they will not know; use it for that they ought to watch the social medias for using the computers; however.
Technology is the most powerful key for the individuals to give them more opportunities in the life.
However
, l
agree
that computers should drive the cars
instead
of humans for two main areas. ‌
Firstly
, in this period there are
many type
of technologies that they could
get
the great position in the future. In case that humans should have money and could
buy
the computers,
yet
they will not know;
use
it for that they ought to
watch
the social medias for using the computers;
however
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, computers are useful for people but others think that it is not. To what extant

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